Phone Systems :)
https://pjltelecom.com
Hey everyone! We have already launched our phone service on our site. But I'd appreciate some feedback to see if we could improve our site. Someone recommend an about us which I have not yet added. Our site is https://pjltelecom.com/
Any feedback is much appreciated! If you have any questions let me know as well! Thanks everyone!
Hey Preston, just took a look. At first glance I think your copy is too generic on the homepage. It was hard for me to get a sense on what specifically you offer.
Here is some more specific feedback: https://monosnap.com/file/HJwqWvU5ubGkUGcUvu0MUMkRfrXDOC
For the H2 -- try and think who your target customer is and what their needs are and position your H2 to it solves their need. Do they want a simple solution? Do they want a Robust solution? Do they want white-glove service so they can focus on their business? Is it for entrepreneurs or executives, or for office managers? Understand who they are and why your solution solves their need then put that in the H2.
I think the content you have on your services page is more specific and valuable, you may want to consider moving some of that info to the homepage.
Hey! Thanks so much for the recommendations! I am going to start putting those into place today!
My pleasure, glad it was helpful! Good luck!