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Please critique my app's landing page!

I am currently working on a web app and am ready to start the search for early users/drum up interest. I need a landing page that looks great and professional. What I've made here is the best I can do with the little design knowledge I have (I'm a developer with no design experience). Please let me know if there's anything you guys would think needs to be changed, redone, or removed entirely!

http://imgur.com/a/T4F8K

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    Yeah I'll echo other sentiments and say I like the design. At first I didn't understand if your product would be for personal use or professional, I was left with questions. But, the graphic clearly shows personal stuff, so that clears it up.

    Copy-wise though, I wonder if you could make it a little more aspirational. Debt is a burden, a weight around a person's kneck. Removing that is liberating, freeing, life changing! I wonder if you could convey that message to really get viewers excited about the prospect of using your product to get that feeling.

    Just a thought.

    Good work

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      That's a great idea about the copy - I will definitely be refactoring in that direction! Thanks for the awesome input. My hope is to start collecting emails as I get close to wrapping up development

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    Looks good actually.

    Just one nitpick - considering the UI of your product doesn't have any rounded corners, I think you should carry forward that sharpness to the signup form too. The form elements could probably use some more breathing space (padding).

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      Awesome, just changed it thank you!

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    no design experience? that's actually pretty good design.

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    I am not a UI guy but I like it. All the text is clear. it looks professional and slick.

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