Please critique my landing page!
Hello Fellow Hackers!
I have this idea of building a SaaS tool for AWS Billing for a while and I finally built a landing page for the service. I have no experience building landing pages so I’d love some feedback from you folks especially on:
- Design / layout
- Quality of the copy
This is my landing page: https://www.zenmetrics.io
I was heavily inspired by Buffer and how they ran their MVP test and this is what I was hoping to do.
Thank you!
Some tips :)
Thanks a lot for your feedback! It was helpful and I have made some changes to the landing page based on your feedback!
Yep! Completely agree here. I felt a bit misled when the plans and pricing button was a modal to collect email. I think a “hop on the waiting list” would be more appropriate.
I love the Buffer example. I'll give some advice rather than some feedback.
I would explain the value you're bringing a little more in detail (bullet list). Maybe add some social proof (Maybe of people who have been unpleasantly surprised by this problem. )Possibly add something a little more benefit-oriented on your action button. "Dont be Surprised" "Learn to Work without worry again"(shorten this benefit but it gets the message across I think lol"
Also, if you want to tap a marketing community for makers with this request come on over:
https://bit.ly/2lQEJxw
Thanks a lot for the advice! I have tried to improve the copy on the page by adding more content and improving the CTA. Let me know what you think!
I'll check out your community!
Hope it helps as Im not an expert but just figuring it out like you. I think you joined or i may have another Abhishek. Either way thanks either way. Hope i can help out in other ways.
Hi Abhishek !
Add more content as @mesthabro and @volkandkaya recommended, using same style and color scheme.
Keep it up ! :)
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to give feedback. Based on your feedback, I have made the CTA bigger and more visible. I have also added more content to the page. Let me know what you think!
Hi Abhishek !
This is much better !
Great work, Abhishek !
You make a strong clear value proposition on the landing page, and as someone who has been hit with unexpected AWS bills in the past, I like the idea of a simple UI to monitor my expenses.
I would prefer to see the mailing list sign up form field on the landing page in place of the "plans and pricing" button. If you do keep a button there, consider finding a stronger call to action like "Sign me up!"
Also, the three cards at the bottom look good but could use a little more paragraph text.
Thanks for taking the time to give feedback! It was really helpful for me. I have updated the CTA as well as adding more information to the cards.
Ahh, so much better!
I love the zenmetrics logo font and header gradient.
Make the "Daily reports" box the same height as "Alerting" & "Saving suggestions"
I really appreciate your feedback! I have made all the boxes the same height now!
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Thanks for the feedback! I didn't include any pricing information on the page because honestly I have no idea what pricing would look like.