Please critique my landing page
My company's landing page is focused on getting demos from businesses and enterprises. Please feel free to leave your feedback!
My company's landing page is focused on getting demos from businesses and enterprises. Please feel free to leave your feedback!
The design is great and the numbers showing how much money is currently being wasted without using Shelf is smart, although I would add a link that goes directly to the study.
It may just be me, but I hate when sites use JS to play with my scroll. I end up just scrolling past the meat and close the tab.
+1. I get that this is mostly an annoyed-engineer's complaint about the modern web, but whatever you're doing to hijack native browser scrolling does not inspire confidence that the rest of your application will be non-janky.
Thank you, Ryan! We used Unbounce to build the pages, so I'm not sure if the scroll is built in that way... I'll have to look into it.
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Thank you! I'll have to check this out.
What a great looking Landing Page. Well done.
I agree with most that has been said in previous comments. I would add one more thing: As an interested user, I would be a little bit concerned about what happens after I filled out the "demo" form. Are you guys gonna contact me? Do I have to invest more time into the demo? I always love to have a look at a new tool by myself first to understand what it does. So, I would want to know if this is what happens or not.
Thank you for this great feedback! If you fill out the form, it takes you to Calendly to schedule a demo time. Do you think it would be worth it to explain this on the lightbox form or would that add too much bulk to the CTA? We wanted to make it as simple as possible, so I'm curious to hear what would help make people comfortable in requesting a demo.
Is there a possibility to check out the platform without having to book a demo or is this a mandatory step?
It's definitely not mandatory, but we did want to keep one straightforward CTA in the case of the landing pages.
Right, so this is a basically an enterprise level wiki/intranet right?
Few things:
Under 'stop wasting time and money' module, the money lost per staff member examples are repeated exactly twice with two different $ figures? On a similar note, how about a calculator that the user can use to key in real numbers?
Is this a Mac/Windows app, or cloud?
Can you link to the 'as seen in' articles for credibility.
If all the company's you have listed are actually using this, that's really impressive. Can you condense it the logos down to just a single row? I feel like a ton of the page is taken up by the logos before I even know what you're selling.
Not a huge fan of the enquiry form. No CTA visible, unnecessary fields(?), no clarity around what happens next or what a 'demo' of your product actually is.
That's just some ideas for now - great work!
Thanks so much for the feedback, Dan! We are still perfecting our messaging, but yes, you could call it that. We are working out how we want to position our product.
It's an app, not cloud-based.
Great idea about the links.
I'm not sure how condensing the logos down to a single row can work - I'm afraid we'll have to make them too small and it will look messy. Unless you had something else in mind?
And yes, we're definitely going to have to do some work on the form. Great ideas!
I agree with the others here and think it looks great.
My only comment would be that the modal + form that you show when you click the "Request a demo" CTA buttons are a little underwhelming in comparison.
Perhaps you could make the modal taller to prevent scrolling on larger screens and beautify the heading area a little (perhaps add another clear benefit of Shelf under the heading to keep the user motivated).
I haven't filled out the form, so perhaps this is covered on the thank-you page, but it's generally a good idea to be very specific with what the next step is for the user. Your primary CTA on that screen is another "Request a demo" button, but perhaps you could add some extra detail underneath saying something along the lines of "And we'll call you in 24 hours". It just let's the user know what they're in for.
It's also quite a large form, but that won't prevented motivated buyers from filling it out. It might be a good filtering mechanism if that's what you're going for.
Great commentary, thank you! We didn't even focus much on lightbox, so this is very helpful.
This is great. My only comment is that it's not obvious that it's cross-platform, given the Mac-specific screenshot. I'm assuming you used Electron for the app and it will be cross-platform, but less technical viewers might not. I would have icons for the supported platforms (Mac, Windows, Linux, iOS, Android, etc).
Antonio, thanks for the feedback! Very very good point... we'll have to add this in.
This looks good!!
At a glance, the only comment I have is that the text is hard to read in some places and seems to be inconsistent. Everything above the fold is stronger than the rest of the page. Small tweaks w/ the font styles, sizes, and colors might help? Also, I think you can add more vertical spacing (ie. padding) for most of your sections. Hope that helps?!
Thank you so so much! This is our first try at a landing page using Unbounce and I don't have much experience creating websites, so we're going to have our design guru come in and make it look way better. Unbounce is also a little difficult to navigate, so we definitely have to try to go in and standardize. I appreciate the feedback!
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Thank you so much! I personally have no idea what an image optimiser is, but I'll hand this feedback to our designer :)