Please give feed back on my landing page copy
I just got the landing page for my iOS podcast player up. I'm using a template and I'm not going to mess with the CSS or feature list of that. I just want to know if there's anything I can do to make the copy simpler or more engaging. Also please point out typos and grammatical errors (I'm not a native English speaker.)
Hey Oivvio! Congrats on getting your landing page up. I have some copy suggestions -- here's a quick video with some ideas: https://www.loom.com/share/48e5ed647f684baa97ae5e9f396a47f5
-Annie
Wow Annie! This is such valuable and generous feedback. I totally get that I need a new, more descriptive, tagline. I'll work through all of your tips and post again next week.
Slick hero section. The tagline could perhaps run smoother. Now it consists of two sentences which both end in "podcast". Maybe just have the first sentence: "watch worthy podcasts", and then expand on that in a section below.
Below the hero section there's suddenly a lot of information. You could try to feed that info at a more gentle pace. Could be as simple as making more use of vertical white space.
The favicon is different from the logo shown on the page.
Thanks so much Almar! I'll work on the tagline and see if I can get a bit more space in there. The favicon right now is picked up from TestFlight since the app is not in the App Store yet. But that'll change as soon as I go live.
Nice concept
Thanks!