Please give feedback on my landing page
Hello Indie Hackers,
I have developed a productivity / to-do list app - Focused. Focused increases your productivity by making it easy to focus on what's important and urgent.
I would really appreciate it if you could take a few minutes to give me feedback on the landing page - https://www.focusedtodo.com/
Thanks in advance.
@iakbar,
You say that Focused:
But you don't say in your hero how that happens. Or why that's important? (And yes, obviously it's important but drill it home)
I second this one. The headline "A minimal to-do list app with a clean interface" doesn't make the app stand out from the rest.
Thanks for the suggestion. Will update the hero section with more information.
Hey @iakbar - the hero section is amazing and clean.
When I scroll down, I can't focus and no idea why I should read. I expect a landing page is move visual driven and keywords only :)
I'm running a side project on Notion, would be awesome to hear your feedback too!
As the others wrote - it's too much text...
Maybe you can try to describe your product and 2-3 tweet sized messages (280 characters each). Include more images. Group features in sections.
If you want to leave the more detailed descriptions, write a blog post about it.
Yes. I have had a few people tell me that there's a lot of text. Will reduce the text on the home page and move the detailed content into a blog post as suggested.
Hey @iakbar, I agree with @dominicabela too. The minimalist feel is nice but there is way too much text. I felt so overwhelmed with all the content and just skimmed through instead.
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Thanks for the suggestion. Will check out the HTML themes.
Cool, let me know what you think :)
I like the minimal look but I think there's too much text overall. You have several paragraphs and lists all with the same font size so it's hard to skim and get the overall idea.
I would break it up into sections - each section having a large header that explains a benefit and then you can explain the details below it.
Thanks. That really makes sense.