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Please give me some feedback on my landing page
by
Thang
It would be a microsaas
https://www.urgentindex.com
#landing-page-feedback
The page looks good. The consistent color scheme and background imagery hold the theme together well.
As far as the logo, not sure if there is any flexibility on the wordmark, but try separating URGENT and INDEX a bit more. It reads as one word and can be confusing.
In the third section, I would work on the leveling of each row. The side-by-side view should be the same. For example, if the heading on the left takes up two lines, the heading on the right should do the same. Or you can have one column moved slightly below the other to make the action look deliberate.
There is a breakpoint between the third section and the "Get Early Access" section where the gray background image is cut off. Can you get the image to continue and show fully? I think it will help with the flow of the page.
The social media icons in the footer seem out of place. Maybe due to their sizing or placement. See if you can move them somewhere on the page that may better suit them.
Overall, very clean and simple to use. Great work!
Thank @Divad,
I have just updated as some points of your feedback!
I really like the look of this!
One comment regarding wording. Where you have:
Nice and clean with clear call-to-action. Just FYI, your form (get early access) was blocked by my ad blocker (uBlock) so I didn't see it until I disabled that plugin.
Hi,
I had some trouble reading the slogan. Before I know more, maybe change it to:
"Automatically index your posts by search engines around the world"
Now I wonder what a "post" is? Is it content, or a website, or a webpage, or a part of a webpage?
Otherwise the slogan could be:
"Automatic page indexing by search engines around the world"
Reading on I find that it basically syncs your new website updates with search engines around the world? If so:
"Instantly push your website changes to search engines around the world"
I like that the site is very concise, but the graphic is a bit generic IMHO, not sure what it's trying to tell me. I'd go with a graphic of search engine logo's and sync symbols.
Anyway, my 2cts.
Writing the slogan is hard :)
I have done another try. Could you take a look again @rikschennink?
Thanks!
An amazing improvement, well done! 👏