Please give me some points to improve my landing

I looked into with m iPhone. It's not bad as you think (mobile)

1. the hero image is aligned to the right, therefore i can scroll the website vertically. I recommend to fix that.
2. The margins icons and text on 1-3 steps is on mobile are all the same. It takes 1-2 seconds to figure out which text ist step 1 and so. May fix the margins
3. I don't like the hero image, personally.

I know where you took this hero image, and also I know there are plenty others on her site to take. ;)

Best

Hi Raja,

I quite like your landing page. Perhaps the only thought I have is that the image could include some element that's relevant to the product. For example adding a page icon or something along those lines.
Good work and best of luck :)

Hello! Here's my feedback:

• Your customer should get the value in one scroll or 2 seconds. An average customer won't spend that much time on your landing page so you really need to get that message across as soon as you can. On your landing page, it's really difficult to get that. I really had to read each text to understand Notion Webhook. The average customer won't do that.
• Your average customer is skimming. You have a lot of paragraphs that sadly, many people won't dig into. I'd try to shorten that and cut it to the point.
• I'd focus on the end result vs. the technology that allows you to do it. I don't know your audience but I'm assuming it's everyday people who might not be technical. Using webhook and API is cool but that might confuse them.
• I'd put some images of your product. I'm not a fan of the illustration of the hero. It's vague and as a customer, I rather get a preview of what I'm buying.
• Nit: It says free trail instead of free trial on the pricing page

Hope that helps! Let me know if you need me to elaborate on anything.

I'm also working on a landing page myself, almost in the same stage as you to get feedback on in, but I'm still looking for the courage to publish it. I have I feel your page looks better than mine. In general I like and I like the theme.

Now here are the things you might improve:

• I would make the try for free button orange. Very orange.
• Optimize for mobile
• More call to action text, make it should shorter and actionable, put the WHY before the HOW.

I'm looking at those resources(I found them on other posts on IH, I'm not affiliated with them in any ways, just consider them useful):

https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages
https://marketingexamples.com/landing-page/guide
https://userlist.com/blog/positioning-overhaul/
https://versoly.com/

Update: There is also a Landing Page Feedback group here, maybe you can add your post there:

https://www.indiehackers.com/group/landing-page-feedback

I think it's not responsive correct me if I'm wrong. First impression it looks boring to me tbh. It's very dull colours. Users like colourful things. It' s okay if you wan't to go black and white but it can be more beautiful imo. No decent animation like it looks like an old news paper.

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Hi Raja, here's my quick 2-cent.

• I would on the H1 and sub-text. "Listen for Notion events" makes sense to me. "Like a pro" really doesn't say much. Try switching the "like a pro" with something more meaningful or how your solution adds value to the user. I'm a Notion user and I'm a little unsure how your product can improve my Notion workflow. Especially the last sentence in the sub-text "Run anything on the cloud when your Notion document changes."
• I would try to create a more interesting hero image or something that's more related to your service.
• The section below the hero "What it can do?" seems a little much. I only have one example on my screen, while you're writing it can do a lot of different things. I would either add more examples or delete the section and move the description of what it can do up in the sub-text.
• "How it works" section is nice. I would not include a "step 3" just to write there is no step 3. It's much more pleasing for the visitor to only see two steps. Makes the process seem a lot easier.

Hope it helps! Great work.