Please hard critic our landing page?

Nice idea @rasheedridwon Many feedback on the business already. I will focus on the color palette and typography structure. Quick feedback below:

1. Color palette: I can roughly see more than 10 colors being used. It would be awesome if you can stick with maximum 3 major colors (at least the 2 colors from the logo) to achieve a better consistency

2. Typography structure: It's nice to have Serif and Sans Serif at the same time, but I can see plenty of design errors in terms of font size pairing, upper- and lower-case etc

Quick feedback:

1. Not sure what your product is based on this page
2. Not sure why there's an email signup and app download buttons.
3. Does this integrate with existing platforms? What does the end user interface look like?

I think overall this page needs to be more direct and clear.

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Idk if there is a design principle for it, but the fact that logo uses serif font and the rest of page uses sans serif really bothers me. In general logo does not match the rest of the pages and vice versa and it gets me questioning if I should trust this page.

Hey, overall, looks good.
Few quick design points:

• Use SVG for images, will get much crispier image quality
• Would add some border-radius even few pixels to input field and button
• Add white background to the input field
• Left align app store icons to the text above it
• Experiment with using a different typeface. Current typeface looks to plain to my taste
• Some of the text in the images is illegible, so would either scale-up the text or rethink the illustration (could use a simplified mock-up style illustration that has a line instead of a text displayed)

Hope that helps

I've never heard of 'social sellers' or 'social buyers'. I'm not sure if this is a niche term and I could just be out of the loop but I'd make sure your target audience knows this terminology and if not, I'd suggest changing that wording up :)

I have no idea what the app does. Some of the reviews seem to be worded strangely. Capitalization seems to be random in the copy.

The design looks great though!

I think really nailing down what the pain point this solves and making that the headline would be a good next step.

I don't know what this does at all from that page.

Do you let me add shipping to items that don't normally ship to my place and for me to charge a fee? Like really have no idea.