Please Review: Company 360 Product Landing Page.

Hi John, nice work on this product, looks very promising and interesting.

As someone who isn't very proficient with design, it says a lot when even I think the front page is not very pretty. The highlights on the right look tacky, and the font (it seems to be Times New Roman) looks very outdated.

It is obvious you provide metrics, but how do users benefit from it? From the front page and tagline, you can help a prospect understand how the platform benefits them by saying how they can use it and what the outcome of being on your platform will be (e.g. understand risks in your portfolio more effectively, or make less risky investment choices much more quickly).

Hope this helps :)

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Hi John, nice work on this product, looks very promising and interesting.

As someone who isn't very proficient with design, it says a lot when even I think the front page is not very pretty. The highlights on the right look tacky, and the font (it seems to be Times New Roman) looks very outdated.

It is obvious you provide metrics, but how do users benefit from it? From the front page and tagline, you can help a prospect understand how the platform benefits them by saying how they can use it and what the outcome of being on your platform will be (e.g. understand risks in your portfolio more effectively, or make less risky investment choices much more quickly).

Hope this helps :)

alijasem

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5 years ago
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