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Please review my landing page

I am not sure if I get the message across clearly enough, I find not many people are clicking on the signup link or are interested (CTA). What am I missing? That they are not willing to even try out the demo link?

Here is the link:
https://tryonzauth.com

on July 6, 2022
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    That they are not willing to even try out the demo link?

    The demo link is really not prominent and for the demo doesn't even load ("biteable.com rejected the connection").

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      Oh, thanks for that, I think they did send me an email regarding it, probably gotta create another video... haven't had time to action it, a lot of admin task creating these assets haha, but thanks for your feedback.

      Demo link is really in github / documentations link, not the video, are we talking about the same thing?

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        Ah okay, I now found the demo. It is hard to find! I think you should feature it prominently on the website, at least for devices that have a finger print/face recognition (I could even use the finger print on my MacBook).

        Little feedback about the login popup: The buttons are labeled "Magic Link login" and "Web Auth Login". I think these are very technical terms and will confuse non-technical users. IMO labels "Send login link via email" and "Use fingerprint or facial recognition" or similar would be more clear.

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    Sorry for roasting your site. But, I hope this helps:

    • It is slow
    • Site title is wrong
    • Hero GIF is distracting
    • Font is too fat
    • Change "sign up" CTA color
    • JS, NodeJS logo look the same
    • Too much white color in font
    • Footer needs fixing
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      All good, thanks for your feedback! Will take those points into consideration.
      But Sign Up CTA, what color do u recommend? Not white font, then what other colors? I tried other colors, but not very clear on my monitor lol, I love the white/dark contrast myself.

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    Some some quick points:

    • It loads a bit slowly.
    • A lot of different font sizes are used, looks a bit weird.
    • I the dark and white section combo when you scroll. Maybe make some white sections bigger, or 2 sections inside 1 white background.
    • And everything is "squished", increase the padding.

    I really like the product tho! Keep it up.

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      Thx, will try to improve those aspects

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    Hey, really cool product. If I ever want to add biometric login to my websites, I now know where to go :)

    Some feedback for the landing page:

    • Your subheader “Add biometric login (WebAuthn) to your website in less than 5 minutes. Say goodbye to passwords forever.” is a lot stronger than “Sign in with your fingerprint or FaceID” in my opinion. Since the subheader conveys a concrete benefit and speaks directly to devs. Devs probably don’t want to “sign in with fingerprint or FaceID” but they want to add biometric logins so that their users can sign in with fingerprint or FaceID.
    • The animated gif in the hero looks cool but maybe doesn’t do a whole lot in convincing the devs that they should definitely try a demo or signup. I think a stronger use of the hero image would be to showcase just how easy it is to add WebAuthn with OnzAuth, i.e. an image of the very few lines of code you’d need to get up and running.
    • Try a dark coloured text instead of white for the CTA. It’d be easier to read & click on.
    • The sentence “We don't want to store any Passwords or Biometric information” sounds a bit vague. Does it mean “we don’t store any passwords”? If so, I think it’d be clearer to say that instead :)
    • For “Increase conversion”, a way to make this copy more powerful would be to back it up with real numbers from studies (e.g. increase conversion by 35%) . Is there an existing study that found how much passwordless logins increase conversion? If so, definitely use it.
    • Give us more exciting details on how OnzAuth manages to not store biometrics in authentication. As a dev (and I imagine other devs share this feeling), I’d love to learn more in technical detail.

    When you say not many people are interested, is most of your traffic coming from developers?

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      Awesome, most of them make a lot of sense, I will implement some of your advice soon. Thanks so much.

      Yeah, traffic is mostly from developers or Reddit forums atm. I find Developers are not the best paying customers.

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    Congratulations on the idea. I love the clear and compelling headline as well as the simplicity in overall design, although I wanted to understand the app’s performance so far, but couldn’t really locate a case study.

    What you might want to go for are testimonials videos or customer success story videos that will provide social proof of your skill, establish your credibility and authority and will additionally raise awareness about your brand.

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      Awesome thanks for the heads up will check u out.