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Please review my website copy ๐Ÿ™

https://www.3ideas.co/
submitted this linkon July 17, 2022
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    You didn't ask for this but here are my 2 cents: I never, never, never chose business names that shape my service.

    Now you like the "3 ideas" method. But what happens if the market is willing to pay $49 a month for 2 premium ideas? What happens if you scale your team and offer 5 ideas per month? What happens if you pivot to a very premium service and add more developed ideas for $299 a month but just 1 idea per month?

    If you are starting, I would strongly advise you to change the name or choose a number just as figurative speaking, like 99designs, they don't offer 99 designs per project, it's just a name.

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      Good point. Double that for naming a company - real pain to change later.

      Naming a product can be a real time-drag to deal with though. For early stage, I reckon getting to launch and PMF is top priority. Can always change the name later (if required). Similar to 99designs, gigs on Fiverr charge almost anything but $5 these days.

      Seems like 3ideas is already making money. Congrats! Keep going :).

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    I absolutely love the UI of this website! A perfect, fresh interface, just what anyone would want! Maybe change the domain name to something more recognisable? And professional?

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      Will look into this.

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    This is a very unique idea and you have a great landing page.

    "Forget about the hassle of building landing pages and, and designing logos. Instead, focus on validating your startup ideas off the bat!" This sentence at the bottom of your website is very strong and clearly portrays your mission/ the value you are offering. I would move it to the top under your heading.

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      Thanks for this! WIll get it on top.

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    Here are some notes I made while scrolling through your page:

    • Interesting idea, pricing seems reasonable.

    • Immediately I think "Will other people get the same idea you send me? Does that mean I have competitors with the same website as me?"

    • I think julian.com or "Julian Shapiro" should have a link.

    • "Landing pages that convert" Good proposition, I see the value.

    • "Along with the landing page & idea you will get pre-written copy and business model ready for you."
      I don't understand this. What is the copy for? Isn't the copy part of the landing page?

    • "This is an awesome way to build a portfolio of products and get started on your founder journey."
      This is a bit of a silly quote since you're the founder of the product and obviously biased. I would get one from someone else.

    Cool concept Imran!

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      Thanks for all the points. Will incorporate these suggestions.

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    My first question would be: is every customer receiving the same landing page templates for their products? It's not a big deal, since for now its an indie product, but if this service scales, I'd be concerned that everyone else who uses your service also has a similar, if not identical, website design as me. Now, most audiences won't notice, they just want a professional website to browse as they asses your offer, but it'd still be a no-go for me to use this service knowing that my site isn't really "unique". I'm not advocating for everyone's site to reinvent the wheel, but I prefer my sites to have some type of personality that sets them apart. It often gets people attention.

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      For now yes. As we grow, weโ€™ll add the ability to select industry, and types of startups like marketplaces, plugins, etc.

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    Headline sounds nice. You can prob modify your CTA wording. "$15 Subscribe" doesn't sound grammatically correct. Maybe replace it with "Subscribe for $15". You're probably not a native/fluent English speaker and that's okay.

    You have many such phrases: "request free sample", "setup support", etc. Maybe use a tool like Quillbot so make those phrases sound more natural.

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    With a name like yours, I bet you enjoy saying โ€œoff the batโ€.

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    I see a few errors.
    If you want to email me I'd like to help.
    -emptybrother7