Please rip my new landing page to shreds

Hi Andy

I have quite a few insights that will help you acquire new signups to your SaaS (great concept too!)

In terms of Value Proposition:
"Chibit empowers audio creators with growing their audience.
Our technology solutions let's you easily share the most marketable moments in your podcast episode." -> Try condense this into something like -> "Engage your audience, with your favourite moments."

Display Some Metrics of the value it will have for your customers (ie Save 6 hours per month)

Show some mockups of the product

Remember the "Z" - the eye pattern people use when analysing information

Identify your customer/s down to the granular and speak only to them (25 year old African-American Males who eat Tacos for Lunch in California)

The contrast is quite hard on the eyes

Only ask for their email for now (remove friction), have it easy to access everywhere on the page.

I would also encourage you to look saaslandingpage.com for some inspiration too :)

If you would like further help, flick me an email at jayden@hellosimple.co

I am opening up some coaching calls again so am happy to chat about how I could guide you (or if you are looking, my team and I could design and build it for you) create a killer LP or we could do a screen record and I could use it on Youtube (building a backlog)

The "grow your audience" thing is way too vague. I'd like to see an example or demo somewhere so I know what that means.

I ran Headlamp, cleared all the tracking dots except for one, and found no issues. The only dot I couldn't clear was the one for the hidden text input tag in the waitlist form.

Hi Andy! Here are my thoughts:

1. Create and stick to a color palette. I like using https://coolors.co/ for this. Make sure that your text color is always readable on your background by checking their contrast here: https://coolors.co/contrast-checker/112a46-acc8e5

2. Make the spacing consistent and align everything to the center of the page.

3. The site makes it obvious what value you provide your subscribers, but it doesn't demonstrate how you accomplish these things. It is good to focus on value > product features, but I think you should still explain the "how"

My first impressions:

1. The page looks very amateurish.
2. Colors combination looks very ugly to me.
3. Spacing is all over the place, especially in the hero paragraph.
4. I have no idea what the product does from reading the hero section.

I would recommend starting with a landing page template and just changing the text/images, the current design is very poor and makes it really hard to read.

Am I blind, or is there no link to your landing page?
Is it about Trumbull, the product listed on your profile?

I'd love to give feedback.