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Please, roast landing pages

by MaryanaK

We just launched a new marketing landing page for google ads (special search term - same day essay)!
I'd love to hear your thoughts:
Looking at the site, what do you think about blocks?
What do you think of the first screen?
https://domyessay.com/same-day-essay
https://domyessay.com/same-day-paper

MaryanaK's avatarMaryanaK
on September 25, 2020
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    hi maryana. what do you mean blocks?

    here are my notes

    • love that i know exactly what you're offering instantly. GOOD!!!
    • "calculate the price" could be better worded. maybe "instant quote"?
    • wow, people put their names and faces as writers? shameless! amazing!
    • scrolling through the page, i dont really have any issues with the site. i get it, you're pretty much giving me the info i need
    • maybe a sample paragraph from a purchased essay would be nice to see? like prove to me that this isn't some ESL farm in india (the author profiles help, but show me a preview of the result... show me the paper makes me look smart but not too smart!)
    • the same-day-paper site is a little different. i think i'm actually less sure of what is being offered without the quote generator.
    • i dont want to click "write my paper" that's why i'm on this website! i'm not writing it! maybe rename to "get someone to write my paper"
    • what do i care about trustpilot and sitejabber? are those review sites that students use? i've never heard of them sorry. maybe customer testimonials instead with names of schools where they didnt get caught
    • when i click on the step123 pictures, they expand and they aren't the same images! oops! must fix, super confusing (light theme vs dark theme?)
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      Thank you ))))))

      MaryanaK's avatar MaryanaK
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