PLEASE ROAST ME!

The over the fold area has 7 clickable buttons or links, which is just way too much for my liking. You need to decide where you want me to look (and possibly click), letting me choose from 7 makes me want to click nothing.

The over the fold area is visually quite dull. The only color is blue and the only visual element is that blue spring at the right corner, which has zero relevance to you or your product.

Your number one pitch "The AI writing tool that helps you publish faster" doesn't sound that amazing. I can generate content and publish in seconds with literally any AI tool. I don't want a tool that allows me to publish faster. What I care about is the quality of the AI generated content (and how much that costs).

The Benefits section is actually a Features section (these are features, not benefits), and it looks visually dull with those cheap looking icons that lack any color. Using such on mouse hover effect on these areas make them look like clickable buttons, but they aren't actually clickable, which is not great UX.

The FAQ has the number one question that I have: How much does it cost? But its answer, "Our complete library of tools is free to use. The Starter plan gives you 10 credits each month to use Enwrite." reads like it was generated by AI and doesn't really answer the question at all. First it says it's free, then it says there is some Starter Plan (this is the first time I hear about hits), and then there are some credits, that I don't know what they are or how they work. It doesn't answer the question at all.

I think the landing page needs a lot of work. You could start by showing your actual product first. How about a screenshot? At this point, I don't even know what your product is. Then, how about showing what your product can do? Show an example or what best: a live demo, of your app generating content. Then introduce the pricing in some meaningful way, and after this, you should get some good quality icons that have other colors than just blue.

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For now, your site looks very bare bones. An example being the "SEO metatdata" portion. Does it only write meta data, or are there other SEO uses as well?

Same with "outline" and "introduction and conclusion", those seem to be the most basic of features in a writing app, what differentiates this from the other ones if those are the features?

Why is the pricing page so hard to access? I would not put it in the footer, and would have it in the main menu instead. Customers really hate it when you're hiding the pricing like that.

This is more irritating when you get close to answer the question with "how much does it cost?" in the FAQ, and but then only state the credit system rather than telling the price.

Pricing section is unclear, you've crossed out the $22/month, so what is the price exactly? Is it just $230 per year? And you also seem to have the month highlighted rather than the price, which seems odd.

I would use a video to show what your writing tool can do. From the GPT-3 demo page, there is a wide array of features, so I would demonstrate it with that when creating the video.

Overall, I think it would be a good website with a couple of improvements.

If you're curious, I'm currently developing an API with BLOOM (open source LLM with similar size to GPT-3). Although nothing can really beat GPT-3, this would be a good alternative, and it'll also cost less.

It's still WIP, but you can follow me on twitter for more updates. We're already pretty close to getting another AI (Stable Diffusion) on the cloud: https://twitter.com/TheRealEtch

RichardGao

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4 years ago
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The over the fold area has 7 clickable buttons or links, which is just way too much for my liking. You need to decide where you want me to look (and possibly click), letting me choose from 7 makes me want to click nothing.

The over the fold area is visually quite dull. The only color is blue and the only visual element is that blue spring at the right corner, which has zero relevance to you or your product.

Your number one pitch "The AI writing tool that helps you publish faster" doesn't sound that amazing. I can generate content and publish in seconds with literally any AI tool. I don't want a tool that allows me to publish faster. What I care about is the quality of the AI generated content (and how much that costs).

The Benefits section is actually a Features section (these are features, not benefits), and it looks visually dull with those cheap looking icons that lack any color. Using such on mouse hover effect on these areas make them look like clickable buttons, but they aren't actually clickable, which is not great UX.

The FAQ has the number one question that I have: How much does it cost? But its answer, "Our complete library of tools is free to use. The Starter plan gives you 10 credits each month to use Enwrite." reads like it was generated by AI and doesn't really answer the question at all. First it says it's free, then it says there is some Starter Plan (this is the first time I hear about hits), and then there are some credits, that I don't know what they are or how they work. It doesn't answer the question at all.

I think the landing page needs a lot of work. You could start by showing your actual product first. How about a screenshot? At this point, I don't even know what your product is. Then, how about showing what your product can do? Show an example or what best: a live demo, of your app generating content. Then introduce the pricing in some meaningful way, and after this, you should get some good quality icons that have other colors than just blue.

jv16

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4 years ago
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