Please roast my first SaaS Landing Page
Hey guys!
Hope you're having a great day. I'm super excited to share with you my first SaaS landing page: https://taitopia.design/
I really appreciate any feedback because English is not my native language. I want to make sure that I've done everything in a native way.
- Do you have any comments on the name "Taitopia"? Is it memorable or is it easy to pronounce?
- Is it clear to you what our product does and our selling points?
- How about the texts & copywriting? Does it look professional and compelling?
- How about the design? Any feedback on the theme, typography, layout, or color?
Any idea is welcome! Many thanks!
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It's super clean and looks nice.
The first image's corner radius is different from other images or cards. You can keep them all the same.
Thank you for your thoughtfulness! Will fix it in the upcoming version :)
I don't immediately know who it's for. I dunno if your ideal buyer would, but to me it looks like you might benefit from being a lot clearer about who it is for early on. As they say: "you have three seconds"
Feels like maybe focusing on an ideal buyer would help you talk about benefits instead of features.
Hope that helps! :)
Thank you so much! "talk about benefits instead of features" - this is very insightful. I will definitely be putting it into action in the next version. :)
You're welcome! I think I mostly got that "benefits instead of features" vibe from Jonathan Stark, the "ditching hourly billing" guy.
If you feel like counter-roasting, check out https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-book-of-portraits-for-real-kids-by-dead-painters-32ef9ef961 :)
Congrats! looks really nice and clean! One minor suggestion - maybe add a blurred background to the site header. The header and the site content overlap when you scroll down. https://cloud.zektec.com/jwJnqrCJ
Ah yes! Thanks so much for pointing that out!
Fixed, thanks again. :)