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Please roast my landing page
by
Eyal
Please roast my landing page:
www.dealstudio.co
Hey @Indieyal,
Here I am, returning the favour by roasting your landing page, albeit 2 weeks too late :D
So here we go.
I quite like the landing page design, it’s very easy to navigate. The copy too, is clear and concise, and it accurately reflects the product. I also love how the benefits of the product are clearly stated, and backed up by some stats.
Both the CTAs are clear, and it is easy to understand what action the visitor must take. Though I wish you could find a more definite action call, instead of the overused 'Get Started'.
The overall design of the page is clean and professional, except, maybe I would’ve used a slightly different colour scheme, but that depends on personal taste.
Now, what I'd liked to see better:
The subheading is a bit ambiguous, and could be little more specific. For example, you could try writing the biggest problem it solves.
Lastly, I feel adding certain components of social proof will go a long way in building confidence in the users.
All the very best!
Thanks for taking the time and writing this detailed response! Super valuable :)
Glad you found it useful. Just my 2 cents.
You might look into making the text concise in the Why work with YouTubers? & The Gist section. Also try to incorporate the content of The Gist section in the start of the page only
It looks like you slapped together 4+ differently themed templates. There's little consistency in color, text size, headers, and layout.
Thanks for the feedback!