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Please roast my landing page!
by
melstev22
https://webaholics.co/custom-web-development-ppc/
The over the fold area looks visually too busy. For example, there are at least 7 different font styles being used. The "revenue" chart and the "requested quote" things are unnecessary and only contribute to the overall busy visual look of this area.
When I read the "don’t miss out on a $1,000 discount", the first thing I'm thinking is that if you are offering $1000 discount, this means that this service must be very expensive. You should consider offering a per cent based discount instead, that way your discount is a positive message to the user, not negative.
The main navigation menu looks and feels very awkward when you move mouse cursor over the menu items. Especially the Solutions menu, with those cheap looking icons.
The "Trusted by over 5,000+ clients worldwide" section has no way for me to verify in any way that these are really your clients or what you did for them.
In the "Search Engine Optimization" section, it's weird how the "Proven strategy that sticks." has a green background.
After scrolling all the way down, I still have no idea about how your pricing works. All I know is that you offer me $1000 discount, which implies your service is very expensive, and that makes me not interested in contacting you for more information.
Your landing page gets a speed rating of D-64 out of a maximum of A-100. The website is so slow, Google is going to penalize you with its search results. I don't think that's a great look for a website that pitches me about SEO and the importance of Google search results.
Overall, I think this is pretty good, but it could be better.