Please take a look at this landing page

by Mahdi

Link: https://wbcaa.carrd.co/

This is a Twitter monitoring tool so you can track and monitor any other twitter user.

Any feedback would be appreciated.

Mahdi

on January 9, 2021

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My initial reaction was that "monitor" seems a bit creepy, a bit Big Brother, although monitoring is exactly what the tool does.

Can you set up keywords you're interesting and be notified of those? How about something people can relate to: "Like Google Alerts for Twitter"?

What's the difference between "keeping an eye on" and "tracking" - aren't they both the same thing? Instead, how about:

"See and search all Tweets of any Twitter user (including the things they wish they'd hadn't said)"

The images are a bit cheesy. Given the design of the page, line icons might fit better than photo images (Eagles don't have x-ray vision, AFAIK). How about these for each section:

Archive: https://icons8.com/icon/set/archive/ultraviolet

X-ray: https://icons8.com/icon/set/detective magnifying glass/ultraviolet
(you could rename the section Detective Mode or similar)

Advanced search: https://icons8.com/icon/set/spotlight/ultraviolet
(could be renamed Spotlight (yes, I know, Apple) or Searchlight)

Is "want to delete" meant to be "went to delete"? I'd rewrite this as:

"...so you won't miss anything even if the user deletes their tweets."

"Be the first one to know" is clunky - "Be the first to know" is better, but rather than assume desirability (it's not the new iPhone, after all), why not just stick with "Get notified" or "Stay updated"?

Hope this is useful, and good luck!

jaymie

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  Thanks very much for your feedback! These are really useful.
  I have updated the website according to feedbacks. Regarding the headline "Monitor any Twitter user" I agree with you, it is a bit creepy. Any ideas?
  Re your question, you cannot setup keywords and get notified when they are mentioned in "any" tweet. This is only for one or more twitter users you want to monitor.
  
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    How about "Keep up with any Twitter user" or "Receive updates on your favourite Twitter users", something like that?
    
    If the service tells you when they've posted a new tweet and you can search their entire posting history, consider incorporating "360" into the product name or the tracking activity.
    
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      That's nice but I want it to be on a single line. How about "Never miss a Tweet again"? Does that make sense?
      
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        It makes sense, but you're the product expert here. It's your call.
        
        At the risk of being two lines (or one longer line), something that would engage me would be something playful or suggestive, like:
        
        "See all their tweets, and we mean all"
        
        (I'd put that last "all" in italics)
        
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Hi Mahdix,

Positives:
- Like the background gradient.
- Headline is good
Improvements
- No navigation, no logo. Just put the links of the sections in the navbar for time being.
- The hero icon in black does not fit well. Use an illustration if you do not have a product screen ready.
- The text should be the first thing in the hero section.
- Learn more is not an interesting CTA. Change to something like See how it works or Want to know more.
- The button is a ghost button. It does not get much attention, consider changing it to a solid color background.
- The images do not work well with the copy. Try something that has people using the twitter app. It's preferred if you use product screens.
- I do not see the name of the product being developed. As a visitor, I would really like to know the address of where I am.
Hope this helps.
thearslankhalid

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  Thanks for your useful feedback. As the page is very simple, I don't think it needs a navigation bar.
  I have also added a copy of the registration form to the top of the page.
  I have also changed images and some of the texts.
  
  Re name of the product, I still have not finalised that part. I want to register the domain before putting the name in the landing page.
  
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    Hi mahdix,
    
    The icon in the header gets clipped for smaller viewports. I tested it out on multiple iPhone viewports. You might need to increase the width of the icon.
    
    Features CTA will work better if it's a heading. The primary call to action is to let the user join the waiting list. I would suggest to place the email address and the Let me Know CTA right after the hero paragraph text.
    
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Not bad
Not sure what the first image is, would be better without straight to the title

Could change x-ray vision and the hawk to something else, but not too bad

It's simple to understand and to the point

hatkyinc

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  Thanks for your feedback.
  
  I have changed the images to be more consistent with the page contents.
  
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PS: it is now on socialmonitr.com

Mahdi

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Super simple landingpage 🔥

I would love it if you would add the Twitter logo to the website. Great CTA! It jumps right in your face. Your texts are all concise and understandable.

Overall, a really great website that perfectly reflects the purpose of your product.

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Garreis_Jonathan

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