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Pls roast my landing page πŸ™ πŸ”₯ πŸ–

Hey all!

Worked on this 1-pager this afternoon as the store-front for my Sass:
https://www.zeusdash.com/

I would love some candid feedback!

Couple of cues to help:

  • Do you have any unanswered questions?
  • Are there any red flags from a trust perspective?
on March 20, 2022
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    I got stuck on "...from an SQL database..." because I tend to read SQL as "sequel" in my head.

    Maybe sub "any" or "your" in place of "an" to remove confusion?

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    Hero section:

    • "The dashboard creator for the gods." --> I don't really know what this is supposed to communicate. Focus on the pain point they are facing. "No more leveraging separate tools for queries and visualizations." Or "Faster, easier visualizations that will wow your team and your boss."

    How it works section:

    • "Right now Postgres is the only database connection available. MySQL, Snowflake and BigQuery coming soon!" ---> reframe this so it doesn't seem like a shortcoming. Something like "Connect your Postgres database in X clicks / Y minutes. Support for MySQL, Snowflake and BigQuery coming soon."

    Testimonial section:

    • I don't really have a great suggestion here, but it wasn't capturing attention. Try the standard visual cue tricks...bigger, different color, different font, put a person's face there, change the section's background color and put the quote in a small box to focus attention, something.
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    Really clean and tidy website @tomray. good job.

    I'm not your target audience as it seems quite technical but would suggest showing and example of how this might work. the generic illustration in the hero seems like a filler and lost opportunity.
    I quickly glanced on your twitter and you do have an example :).

    The 3 steps is such a cool USP so maybe make it horizontal instead of vertical so it doesn't disappear bellow the fold.

    On visual: I like the yellow in the logo so maybe align the green in your highlights to it.

    Good luck with your side project!

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    Disclaimer, I have Enterprise-grade SaaS in Telco Industry. But you asked for feedback πŸ˜„

    I think it's great at explaining what it does. But not for whom and what application.

    I don't believe I would ever use such a tool in the cloud. You give good points about security of your app, but I have a trust issues for storing such credentials anywhere.

    My servers don't have them, my git doesn't have them, I don't have them.

    Besides that, even If I did. There's a database firewall.

    So this is not for enterprise applications, therefore, I think we come back to the question for whom this is for and for what kind of applications.

    This might remove naysayers like me in the future πŸ˜„

    Nevertheless, this is a great landing page. I wish you all the luck πŸš€