Landing Page Feedback October 28, 2020

Post your landing page and let others describe what your company does!

Rosie Sherry @rosiesherry

Does your landing page describe your project well?

  1. Visit someone else's landing page for 10 seconds, then come back and tell them what you think their product does.
  2. Link to your own landing page, but don't say anything about it.
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      A quick newsletter for finance updates. Coffee associates it to something they already do daily, so you're using association with a familiar habit, so I love that part.

      I'm unsure what to expect, so I may not subscribe. A small preview of one of your best emails could help get more to sign-up.

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      A newsletter for finance - like morning brew for finance.

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        morning brew is great. what do you like about it?

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          it's concise and well-crafted.

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            thanks. i shall strive for that.

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      I love that - it sounds like something that I'd definitely try out. :D As a copywriter, I would recommend to make the description under the heading more actionable, like: "Get quick daily financial and business news to your inbox. Easy to understand. Make smarter decisions. For free."

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        thank you for the advice. have made the changes accordingly.
        yes you should definitely sign up. every new subscriber makes my day!

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          Awesome, happy to have helped! :) And signed up!

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              Thank you! Loved the newsletter I got today (and I did in fact read it over morning coffee)!

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                Nice! Means a lot to me. Feel free to send over feedback anytime.

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      Nice and simple financial newsletter! No buzzing around, I like that :-)

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      Getting financial news for an early morning buzz on what's happening. I perceived the site to provide daily doses of information over a morning coffee.
      Just wanted to add that nowadays when I see such newsletters, I'd like to see some of the emails and how they are like before subscribing. That gets me convinced if it is worth subscribing to newsletters. After all, we have limited headspace :)

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      You are a daily financial newsletter, nice and simple, got me to subscribe : )

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        thank you! you made our day.

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      Seems like Morning Brew but for people more interested in personal finance and the finance industry. Great design!

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        you give us hope. morning brew is a great success story!

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      A newsletter for finance? Not sure what the coffee part is.

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        Thanks. It is good to hear your opinion. I commonly associate coffee with reading news, but probably presumptuous on my part. Glad to hear a different view.

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      Love it! It's kind of like morning brew but shorter posts/articles?

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      Bidding for a domain, with proceeds going to charity.

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        great! you got it 🥳

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      It took me a while to understand what's going on, to be honest. :') But it's a really cool idea! As a copywriter, I'd probably tell you to offer some context under your CTA, something like - "Beat [Trikz] and show off your website here!"

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        Hi @LanaRafaela thanks for pointing out this topic! I’ll definitely work on that CTA button 😄

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      First impression? Scam to get people to pay up for almost nothing.

      But then, thought it was pretty cool when I saw that you were donating all the proceeds.

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      The initial impression from the domain name was that this was a website where there would be a rich list of people. I go to the landing page and am confused for a moment, probably because the user winning the bid has a middle finger emoji(lol)
      But, after going to your 'Why' section, I understood it as a fun experiment in understanding the psychology of users in the internet.
      Creative! It definitely got me to click on the link so a great place for placing an ad I guess! All the best for this experiment

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      The leaderboard of who is the richest.

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        yeah more or less 🙃

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      Digital repo for pictures

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        Wow thank you for this. I dont see what is wrong? I’m showing still up even in incognito mode. What are you guys showing? Is it timing out?

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          So about your landing page: at first I understood that it's a way to schedule emails/messages for eg birthdays, Christmas, etc. so that you don't have to worry about forgetting that. And I liked the idea.

          But then in the How it Works part I read "Invite Your Loved Ones To Enjoy Endless Memories" and now I'm not sure if it's actually about sharing photos or something like that in social media. That part confused me, or perhaps I was not understanding it well from the beginning.

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            Okay I’ll take this feedback. It’s actually planned to be a self contained web app where you’ll upload videos,photos, audio etc and set unlock dates to friends and family that you invite to the platform. It’s like making a wedding day video for your daughter now. In 10 years when she gets married she’ll see you 10 years younger and remember what you were like back then. If she’s young now she probably won’t remember your personality or how you looked back then. Think birthdays, holidays etc.

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              Ah, I understand now. I like the idea. But I didn't understand it from the landing page!

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                Hey Aleix, I see you signed up for the newsletter. Thanks brother! I'd like to know if you have any suggestions on edits I could make to it?

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                  Yep I've just opened it. At first I had it there forgotten among a few emails, but now that I've opened I'm surprised, it looks great for a first email! Personal in a nice way, it's nice.

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                    Well thanks, I was talking more about the landing page.

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                      Ah alright. Then I'd somehow make it more clear. It's pretty minimalistic when it comes to text and I like that, but I think a paragraph or two explaining more in detail what it is would help.

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          Yep with the new URL it works!

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          Now it works. It's a tool to that makes it possible to schedule a post for your future self and friends.

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            Okay I’ll take this feedback. It’s actually planned to be a self contained web app where you’ll upload videos,photos, audio etc and set unlock dates to friends and family that you invite to the platform. It’s like making a wedding day video for your daughter now. In 10 years when she gets married she’ll see you 10 years younger and remember what you were like back then. If she’s young now she probably won’t remember your personality or how you looked back then. Think birthdays, holidays etc.

            Now with that being said, do you have any way for me to improve on the landing page itself?

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        Wow thank you for this. I dont see what is wrong? I’m showing still up even in incognito mode. What are you guys showing? Is it timing out?

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    Literally building in webflow today - would love your feedback! https://boilerplate-463af1.webflow.io/

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      Hassle-free LLC setup? Awesome! :D

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      Take care of all boring legal documents for startups with founders who has 0 legal experience.

      Really love the style of your website. Making legal stuff feels and sounds more interesting and fun.

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        You got it! Thanks. Do the cartoons feel too playful for legal stuff?

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          I can’t speak for others, but I find it suitable for the audience with a more artsy, creative, and open-minded side. Depending on your target audience, you may consider adjusting your branding design. when thinking of boring stuff like accounting or legal stuff, people often find it boring and complicated. Your business could leave them a different impression.

          This is a great example of an accounting website but looks super cool: https://sealco.ca/ (I saw this a while ago on Flux Youtube Channel).

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      This comment was deleted 22 days ago.

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    https://www.dusk-digital.com/ Started the company over a year ago and never put much thought into the website. Would be happy for some feedback and recommendations.

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    Doesign

    I’m late to the party but let’s go! 😆

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      Showcases UX/UI and graphic design tools used by various companies to collaborate. You can also enlist your own company to present your way of working together on UX/UI matters.

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        Thanks for your reply. Glad it's clear to you. Is there anything it could improve on or something you would like to see better?

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          I felt the women's hand in the animation feels unnatural, probably because I did not understand the intent behind her pulling out something from what seemed like a screen.

          Also not sure about the last animation right before the footer. What's it supposed to mean?

          Everything else is awesome: typeface, colors, brand. Works smoothly. Hope it will be a huge success!

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            Thank you so much @RaulP for the kind words. When I look at it again, you are right it does seem unnatural. I'll look for another animation that fits better with the brand's overall concept.

            Also not sure about the last animation right before the footer. What's it supposed to mean?

            I don't think I have any animation there. Could you describe what does it look like? Thanks.

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              I don't think I have any animation there. Could you describe what does it look like? Thanks.

              Ah, I'm sorry. I wanted to say illustration.

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                The illustration shows the digital (online library) that people access to perform many takes (read books, listen to music, work, etc.) via multiple devices (phone, laptops, tablets, etc.)

                Since the illustration doesn't not clear to you, I'll consider changing/making it clearer.

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      On boarding for app signup with analytics, all in a no code framework!!!!

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      SaaS to create user onboardings to digital products

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      in-app onboarding tool that anyone can setup without writing a single line of code.

      @jatin looks super cool! would love to use it for http://outoflimbo.com, what's the pricing model?

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        Hey @krvin Outoflimbo seems like a SaaS web app although currently we're focussed on mobile apps with web coming later in the pipeline. We can however build it just for you as a service at a pricing model that works for both of us ! :) Whats the best way to reach you ?

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      Onboarding for mobile apps. Btw - I do product tours videos for SaaS :)

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        Hey Rishabh! You're right. Btw - ContentBeta looks great.

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      Step-by-step onboarding for SaaS apps, with a focus on providing insights as to which features are easily used.

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      So its kinda like dovetail, in that you aggregate all teh conversations and then people can tag those conversations as whether they are positive or opportunities for improvement to help the product team.

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        Yes, with a twist...
        The tagging happens automatically.
        https://app.pliik.dev/demos/analyzer

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      Analytics for conversations...it tracks conversations in your CRMs and gives you insights

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      Great looking site - my take on it was that it allows companies to gather feedback elicited from conversations/emails/messages team members have with customers.

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      A Slack integration that makes it easy to give feedback to your co-workers

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      Request feedback for projects, meeting, performance all within Slack.

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        yes! that hits the right notes, thanks for reviewing!

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      Feedback app for teams using slack. Super nice landing page. Looks like something I would use. We're currently keeping it in notion and our team is rather small.

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        music to my ears, but I will believe you when you sign up once your teams gets to the right size lol.

        I am curious, what do you mean about keeping it in notion ? You ask for feedback in your one on ones, or after projects, events and then you save it in notion?

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          Hearing the music yet? Better believe me now - I signed up for the trial 🤣

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          Yeah, pretty much what you described. Got the basic idea from reading and listening to Ray Dalio on how they manage feedback. We give each other feedback after each important client interaction or project, then we use a notion template to capture the feedback.

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            haha, it the OPERA!

            Yeah, Ray Dalio and Radical Candor by Kim Scott were the two books that really inspired and made me think deeper about feedback.

            Glad you signed up and hope inkrement supports you on your feedback journey. I will ping you again at day 14 to learn how it went and get some feedback from you :)

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              Both authors I appreciate as well. Yes feel free to check in again. Am already trying the app and the subtle reminders are super nice! Well done.
              Funny that we are both in the feedback space :)
              Happy to give some live feedback on your app as well. Good weekend and hopefully some R&R.

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      Give feedback about a project to a teammate or colleague right after the project happens, via slack?

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        perfect, thanks for reviewing!

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      A slack app allowing you to share feedback on sth with teammates?

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        yes! thank you for reviewing!

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      An app that provides buy / sell stock alerts based on your research. I don't think you actually conduct trades via your app, however, the buy / sell buttons (in the app screenshot) signal otherwise.

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    This could be productized in a fun way. After a random visitor visits and scroll through for 10 sec, have a pop-up asking them what they understood so far to see whether you should improve your landing page. It is engaging and sweet.

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      Design an email using drag and drop. I only gave this 10 seconds so not entirely sure whether the output is some HTML markup or whether the site does the email sending!

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    Good idea. Here is my page: https://teramine.com. Let us see who (if any) can get it.

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      A web page for sharing your contact details online?!

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        Awesome. Thank you!

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      Feels like a linkedin aimed at creating mentor/mentee relationships.

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        Nice one, who else?

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      Find out the historical rental data for Denver

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        This exists out there but not at the property level unless your paying big time data providers like Costar.com. My idea is more targeted to renters.

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      A backend for apps and web. I’m not a technical founder so not sure of the key point of difference

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        Thanks for taking a look! Yes in a nutshell it is a backend for your apps. One thing I'm trying to do is differentiate from the other BAAS (backend as a service) products by creating the category of HPS "high performance backend"

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      E-commerce website for nordic-style clothing. Looks good!

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      Save money by playing video games. Couldn’t work out how it is that you earn money though

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        Thanks for the feedback! Will adjust to alleviate that confusion on how you earn...

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      Tracks what ARK is buying or selling. Not sure, but assume ARK is a big ETF business. Would take it a step further and explain why this information is important

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        Thanks for the feedback! I definitely assumed that visitors knew who ARK Invest was and why following them is important. I'll work on improving that!

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      API to geolocate users based on their IPs for security/access.

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    Finance news and ideas to make you sound smart when you meet up for coffee with people via Zoom

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      A tool for web development teams. X creates a page, Y puts their notes right next to the place that needs to be changed. Very useful IMO.

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        Thanks uluhonolulu 🙏 you got it right

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      Helps startups find product-market fit.

      What stops me from signing up is not understanding how it works. Would I have to enter all my customers' feedback into it? Frankly, I don't believe it can be automated unless you have some brilliant idea behind it.

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      It will help developers for sure

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      Quickly facilitate inter-office approvals, sign-offs, consents, etc for corprations.

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      Easily create a small website with no-code with quick link to content that you have online in other platform and receive analytics on user engagement

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        Thats pretty much what we do :) Was something not super clear?

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          I think it was pretty clear, but I can still bring some feedback:

          • I was not aware of the micro-site term, so that was a bit difficult to understand
          • I didn't understand why would I use the product? Probably because I am not the target, but I didn't clearly see what's the problem that I could have that this would solve
          • Server-side analytics: this is one of the key feature as I see it, it could be good to include example of metrics that you have so viewer understand the value
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      A service that allows entities to easily create and manage forms; such as new user registration, provide feedback or schedule appointments.

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    Mine is just a prototype.
    Can you figure out what my product does... WITHOUT THEM PICTURES? 😈
    https://bit.ly/3oXVzX8

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      Haha, sharing a Figma prototype, that's cool!

      It's about professional communication, but it's totally unclear how it is different from any professional forum.

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        I suppose it has to do with context. I mean, how is Slack any different from any professional forum?

        In our case, we are focusing on the upskilling niche. As in "upskill your workforce... with your workforce!".

        Do you have any suggestions on how to improve that copy?

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          Unfortunately, no. I'm not your target audience, maybe that's why I didn't get it.

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    Fresh from the oven, even if a bit late for the party 🥳
    Here's Write ✍️ or Die ☠️

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      Lol I like it. Interesting concept. You just charge people if they don't self notify that they completed their goal?

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        Yes! You only pay if you don't publish your blog post on time.

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      I actually signed up on the newsletter. I like it.

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        Thank you so much!!

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      Looks pretty cool, I'm not really fully sure of what it is supposed to be. In about 15 seconds it looks like a type of blog that recommends products/services.

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        Thanks. Yes, it's a place for recommeding other services/websites/blog/podcasts. I will try to make it a place, where people mostly add links to interesting articles or podcasts than only to the landing pages. But that won't be forbidden.

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      This isn't loading for me.

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      I'm actually signing up.

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      Dude.. This is awesome. From what I gathered in the 10-15 seconds, this is very visually appealing and seems incredibly functional. Music enthusiasts will love this. What is the business model and how is traction?

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        thank you so much! that's really motivating. We currently want to attract more Music Enthusiasts, if we get more people on the platform we believe that artists would want to promote their music on the platform itself. We are having trouble getting more users to try the platform out, this is where we are struggling the most, it's great to hear that you liked the platform. Thanks again :)

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      Seems like a good product. Landing page looks nice.

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        Thanks, how do you describe our product? Would like to check if everything is clear :)

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      Great idea! I'm often shocked at how hard to is to find a restaurant's menu, especially one that is legible and easy to navigate on my phone. So the idea that a restaurant could just send their pdf and have it available on a site formatted for mobile sounds kind an easy solution for them.

      I was left with a couple questions after reading through the page:

      Can the restaurant customize the branding? The site demo looks simple, but kind of plain.

      How should a restaurant use the link? Include the QR code on physical menus, on tables? Would they link to this menu from their website? Or could this even be a super lightweight website for a small restaurant?

      Didn't notice anything about pricing.

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      A workflow based automation tool capable of generating reports

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        Thanks for the input. Basically with Quixy organization can be build enterprise grade apps without coding knowledge. In short a no-code platform. Any suggestion for improvements on our landing page?

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          It seems a little intimidating because of how much it can do. The videos inside the laptop shell peak my interest the most because I feel like I'm getting a small glimpse of what exactly that the platform can do for me, but the big issue is that they are too short and don't give me a good understanding of what exactly they do. I think a well made video that demonstrates automating some redundant task or process and shows off the bells and whistles of your platform will do a lot for your landing page.

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    https://www.bubblebiz.in

    Looking forward to hearing from the community.

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      A tool to promote your business online. I'm just curious how it's set up, like is it company profiles or an add on to their website?

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        Hi @laurarossi. Thanks for your interest.

        BubbleBiz is not just a tool to promote your business online. It's an e-commerce solution built to take your business online. By online, we mean everything from building your online presence to marketing your products across social media platforms to managing your user's customers.

        BTW if you are interested in taking your business online or have friends who are looking for something like BubbleBiz, join the club.

        I will be more interested to know about them

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      Page takes a while to load, BTW.

      Daily standup on your browser homepage. Interesting concept! Does it have the ability to filter by team? Sometimes I’m on more than one team, but I don’t want ALL of the updates.

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      A tool to help founders allocate their budgets and know when they need to fundraise. I like the community aspect of it as well!

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        Thanks Laura! What startup are you working for? I don't see it in your profile! :)

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          Hi Yannick! I was at a start-up called Port. which was serving to be a data service platform for anyone looking to start their own business. The company unfortunately went under in the beginning of October so I've been looking for my next step :)

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            The ups and downs of start-up life. I'm sure you'll find something soon! :)

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      A time tracker app, but not for work?

      I'm not sure what "personal" means in this context. Or how the app does it the "right way". (It seems like that sentence might be missing a word or two).

      I was hoping to see some screenshots or examples. Trying the app for a few seconds didn't help me learn about it.

      Looks like the page is pretty basic right now so looking forward to seeing a bit more info :)

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        Thank you very much!

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      time tracker for personal activities

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      snow alert for skiing?

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        You got it! Glad it's clear 😊

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      templates with carefully thought syntax to make devs happy (and productive)

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      template themes targeting developers.

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      Get full paywalled articles with Chrome Extension. It's a really cool idea! How does it work tho? Do you have agreements with magazines?
      Does it work on academic papers?

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        Thanks! Right now we are backing accounts with individual subscriptions. It doesn't work with academic papers, but good idea!

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      Uses ML to write a summary of academic articles.

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      Digital and privacy security and monitoring for influencers. Seems very clear to me.

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      Great idea! I love this.

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      Tinder for businesses. That's a really fun idea haha!
      I'm wondering why it would work tho - Tinder is great as swiping is quick since it only needs one user's decision; you can't have that pace with businesses?

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        Thanks for the feedback.

        I guess we need to add some case studies to the website once we have them?

        We made the in-app onboarding more of a handholding process and we are close to launching a new simplified version.

        It will help businesses connect in many ways. If you download the app and add a business or social account, you will see the hand holding (ways people would use the app).

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      PSD TO HTML for Figma and Sketch

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        exactly Figma/sketch to React/Vue :)

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      Decentralized storage.
      I have been thinking about it for months now. Nice execution, Bravo!

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      Paid live stream channel service. Seems like YouTube, but the content is monetized from day 1. Nice!

      FYI: the footer links don't seem to be going anywhere.

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        That is indeed the case. Thanks, you're right, the footer is kinda useless

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      A hosted bug tracking service

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      A service that gives you instant notifications about your shipments. This way you can act fast and avoid any problems early before the customer complains.

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        You got it! Glad it's clear

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      Maybe an analytics tool for doctors?

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    https://uxdify.com/ux-design-online-course/

    I'm slightly late, but just saw this thread in Digest email :)

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    www.mirador.co.nz
    The name probably isn't that descriptive by itself... :/

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      Crime rate reports in New Zealand per certain areas.

      Seems very helpful if you wanna move there. Though I remember the country has one of the lowest crime rates in the world :) There was only a spike around last Christmas with that massive gunshot, but other than that, I found it pretty safe. Oh, and I heard some stories about Rotorua.

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      A search engine that lets you search for new products by it's main (primary?) colour!

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      App which you can use to schedule SMS reminders for your friends and family
      The picture on the landing page initially made me think these were scheduled emails, but I am not a big user of smartphones so maybe I'm just not used to this SMS interface.

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      Online event creator/manager - similar to eventbrite!
      Only thing I was wondering was whether it hosts online virtual events? So maybe that could be clearer!

      GORGEOUS branding - absolutely love it!

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        spot on, awesome thank you! Yes we definitely do host virtual events. Good point, should make that clearer. Thanks so much!

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      I'm not sure what your product literally does. I understand that it is going to help me avoid the pitfalls of spending too much time on something that doesn't have PMF, but I don't understand how. I'm imagining that maybe it intros me to some early users who give me feedback, but how do I know these are in my target market? How do I know that if I just get more of them that I won't get better feedback?

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        Hey Benjamin,
        It's not so much a product. We are more so consultants and manage the end-to-end process of guiding startups through the validation process! We use our expertise and help do it for them, providing them with insights and next steps. Does that make sense! Thanks for your comments though. :)

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    Hey Rosie, great post (and thanks in advance to anyone who gives my site some of their time).

    www.marketingqualified.com

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      This is a blog/newsletter/training program to help me improve my sales and marketing metrics. You provide interviews with successful managers and tutorial videos. Seems pretty clear to me.

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        That's wonderful to hear and thank you. A while back, I put out an offer to review websites. I reviewed about 230 different sites and that really gave me perspective to what my site was missing and how I could articulate the value prop in fewer words.

        Thank you for validating that the time I spent doing that yielded some pay off :)

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      A minimal blogging platform for people who want to write blog posts in markdown!
      I looked at the demo and it looks really nice!

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      An home IoT device security platform

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      track your money across your bank accounts, stocks and costs to learn your net wealth

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      like an icon set that people can download, but instead of icons it's any sort of graphic, and instead of just being static images, they're editable

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        ahaha I loved the way you described it.

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      Like Trello but specifically for product teams

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      How-to Videos & Course Videos for SaaS Products

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      a way for me to generate multiple icons from an inspiration image. no need to open adobe illustrator or photoshop up at all.

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      Those Unicorns look great for my newsletter. Unicornsfeed.com

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      You are a freelancer that makes elegant wordpress marketing sites

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      Hacks and Products that makes parents' lives easier. As a parent I was trying to find some of those curated lists but I guess you guys are not live yet?

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        Thanks for the feedback! Exactly, I couldn't find a list either, just loads of blogs with a top 10! We are building V1 as we speak, more to come very soon! Thanks again!

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      Apps and hacks for parenting.

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        That's what we are all about, thanks for the feedback!

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      Lifehacker specific to parenting; I dig it!

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      Cool. Was initially wondering if it is a product or a service. But realized you guys have made a marketplace

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        Thanks for taking a look and your feedback; great to know that there's some confusion. Much appreciated!

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      You write really good SEO blog posts.

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      You vet the talent on your end so that when I post a job, I know only high-quality talent will respond.

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        Close!! here business will search for the talent and get connected. No Job posting.

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      Like Daily Coding Problem only instead of just problems, it actually explains the concept behind the solutions to those problems.

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      mail newsletter to learn computer science

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      People can scan the QR code on your product to automatically order more

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      I wish this was my idea - love it.

      Consumer, (netflix autoplay for physical products) remove hurdles, walking to the shop or typing stuff.
      Business customer, increase revenue, e-commerce innovation as promotional conent.

      Also, slick and clean landing page. Great stuff!

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      generate qr code to instantly buy item when your are running low on them

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        Thanks! Did you see it from a consumer perspective, or from the angle of a retailer being able to offer this service to their customers?

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          in the homepage i got the feeling that was more a product for B2B hence a retailer. My 2 cents, at least for me it was not super clear what do you offer until i scrolled down the homepage.

          I would highlight here the fact that you generate a qrcode,nfc or sms that enable a repurchsase :)
          "Replenish, Repeat, Retained.
          Increase recurring revenue and LTV by converting one time customers into repeat purchasers with rapid 1-tap replenishment."

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            I disagree, I would put all the focus on
            "Convert One Time Customers to Repeat Purchasers with 1 tap" as the hero text

            Then list the other stuff.

            Also I would take out the Replenish Repeat Retained, it doesn't mean anything for now, maybe put it as a subheading elsewhere in a features page.

            Awesome looking product by the way!

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              Thanks for the feedback! I was trying to put the focus on the benefits for retailers, and if they're interested, show how it works.

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      Self development from multiple disciplines? I didn't get down further than that in the 10 seconds I looked, but it looks like it's a newsletter where you would get articles with insights on improving yourself.

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        Nice, thank you; does it sound cheesy as a title? Been curious about that but all the people I ask are friends etc, so can’t tell if their opinions as slanted towards being nice

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      Past time for type A high achiever people.

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      Personal development newsletter

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      Simpler version of Google Calendar.

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      Seems to be just like Doodle; perhaps I'm missing the big difference though :)

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        That's it! I just wanted to make a new version of Doodle that didn't have ads

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      Glassdoor with video.

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        Exactly what I was hoping for! Cheers!

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          Great! Let me know if you are looking for more / other feedback.

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      Get better at learning with Mindmap and flashcards combined.

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        That's pretty much the idea. Thanks!

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      Learning / study app the way the 🧠likes it.

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      Bespoke hamster wheels? :)

      After 10 seconds I had no idea other than something to do with "content". There is a lot of intro text.

      Scrolling down further I finally saw your logo and what your business does. It seems that you are trying to start with the pain points to usher in your business as the hero of the story, but I think you may have buried the lead.

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        Oh interesting! And yes, that was the goal: I've been following the "Pain Dream Fix" framework that was introduced by 30x500—this is much longer than I would have written back when I was a copywriter, but it has worked: I've gotten applications from multiple people to participate in the program!

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          Well, if it works it works! "it works" is the only metric that matters!

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            Haha indeed — but thank you for taking a look at it! Much appreciated. :)

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      Took a while to get. A lot of copy to consume. I would try to put one or two key problems you are trying to address at the top.

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      Didn't get it right away, missing what it is you offer exactly.
      After reading the copy some more I understand it should help fix inefficient communication by giving feedback about what to fix and an extended service / consulting upsell.

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        Yes correct- I'm glad at least (once it's read) that it makes sense- definitely taking note of the fact that its taking too long to get there though. Thanks for spending the time!

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          Awesome, you are welcome. Happy to re-review anytime.

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      Okay spent 10 seconds .. and didn’t get it because there was a lot of copy.

      Spent 10 more seconds so now I know it’s through pulse feedback but still don’t know if it’s pulse survey, or email or how that pulse feedback is obtained

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        Got you, and I completely agree. I'm happy you said too much text- this is the first version and I am in the process of getting a video up there to describe how it actually works. Thanks for reviewing!

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      Nice! I can imagine this would be quite useful for the likes of myself and promoting our startup! How long have you had it up and running for? :)

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        A few hours :D
        I launched it yesterday on twitter

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      So it's like a centralised space that you can track where your product is being marketed and what impact it's having? Seems clear to me. The layout is super straightforward!

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        Oh interesting!
        No, that's a giant list of places where you can post your product to get your first users!
        (The header is probably a bit confusing)

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          Ah I see! I was a little bit right and a little bit wrong. Do you have a community of people who want to be first time users and you post your product, and people bite if they like it? (is it similar to product hunt?)

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      This is great. Seems pretty straightforward. It’s a database of all the relevant places to promote a startup

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      Newsletter for startup case studies?

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      Best practice curated blogs to help your business grow!

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      A newsletter and maybe a community? Around growth strategies, including stories of starts up who have used said strategies

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      A curated list of growth case studies?

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      Directory of the best performing growth strategies of various companies in various industries? I will also subscribe! :)

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      A newsletter that gives you a report of the best growth tactics?

      I'll subscribe :)

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      This is very obviously a portfolio. I would look into modernizing it a bit more in terms of design.

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