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on March 16, 2022
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      Retention of SaaS users.

      Thoughts:
      -While reading the conent I was expecting to see another CTA so I would not scroll up

      • A little information on how I’d use your services with my SaaS, i.e. do you have some integrations? How long would this process take?
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      Love it! Did you develop the automation engine by your self or used an open source one?

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        Built one inside Crewcharge (because that's our core offering)

        But for modern and more complicated rules planning to use https://www.npmjs.com/package/json-rules-engine in the future (for storing schema)

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      automation of customer acquisition, activation and retention for Saas

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      A simple way to track website visitors. See-only-what-you-need kind, with an emphasis on privacy.

      I'd remove some of the text on the "01" step. It feels too long and I didn't want to spend the time reading it. It felt too much..

      The animations are nice (what did you use to create those?).

      The green-ish background is a bit heavy on the eye. Maybe you want a color that will make you feel what the product is about - "less is more" - on the light gray spectrum.

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        Thank you so much! I didn't want to invest much time into it so I asked a VA to do the page, so I have no idea about the animations. I guess Carrd provides them.

        The copy is totally my fault, I'll try to fix it!

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      A tool to find microinfluencers and manage your work with them.

      One thing that surprised me is that you let me select the country but not the field I'm interested in. Also, your main header says "manage" but the main problem for me is where to find them.

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        Thanks so much. Really appreciate it!

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      A dashboard for your database?

      This is what I understood from the headline, but I have to say that the "how it works" part made me confused. Perhaps the titles can me describe the benefits, rather than describe the actions you need to do. Step 2 is where I really lost you. It may be because I haven't had the need (or the urgency), but I don't understand why I need to put my SQL query. If I'd connect my database to a cloud viewer, I'd want to be able to query it from the viewer - that's why I don't understand step 2.

      Step 3 is interesting - and if I understand correctly - where the value really is. So say it. Step 3's title should be something like "Discover new business metrics".

      Hope it helps. If you need more feedback, feel free to reach out.

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      Super cool. Reminds me of crypto.com's debit card where you get cashback in crypto everytime you spend. Nice work! Incase it's helpful, One of the first things I did was unfurl the "How does it work" in the FAQs. Could be an idea to have an entire section on the home page digging into how it works. Think people are generally sceptical about getting "free" money.

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        The most similar competitor I know like this is Lolli. Could be good to see what they say and do

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        Thanks @tomray
        That's very insightful. I definitely need to work more on the copy :)

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      Felt like a Notion template for Data Scientists who needs a learning path suggestion. An example image would be useful I think which would help me decide if I wanted to dive in.

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        Thanks for taking a look! I added a demo video - I wonder if that might help?

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          Nice one @sherp3 :) This is useful indeed. Also, your domain is cool as well. Will try to give your site a go soon.

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      Create a compatible Google form with an alternative interface (I think?) and template/theme collection. Embed on your website.

      I noticed there’s a big blank section at the top on iPhone X.

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        Correct! Like an 'alternative front end' to Google Forms almost. How would you suggest clearing that up in the way of language?
        Shoot, I should take another look at it on mobile... 😅

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      A VR app builder and 'store'. Build VR projects via the web interface, and publish it to Virtual Maker's Store or one's own web site. Discover other's projects.

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      Crypto community, very interesting idea

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      a crypto community for creators

      love the pic of courtland on the landing page! 😂

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        Is that Courtland? The pic is from Unsplash. I thought it looked like him (and podcasting) but I didn't realize it was him

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          Lol, I see the credits on the pic now. Courtland photoshoot for Convertkit

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            haha Yep, the man himself!

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      Note-taking app for mobile

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      Business operation tools for freelancers

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      An IT agency for hire

      (after looking at it more I realize this is a two-sided marketplace for business that need to find an IT agency)

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      Video messaging for project progress and updates

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      Love it. What frameworks did you use to build the website?

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        Thanks! The landing page is actually HTML/CSS :-).. but the app is built with vue + vuetify.

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      A way to manage everything in your life... (but I don't know how it does that)

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        Thanks for the feedback! I should work on illustrating the how better indeed!

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      Purpose:
      Code monitoring with push notifications

      Thoughts:
      The angled line and devices at top make every feel crooked

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      Purpose:
      Find out what people say about you on Twitter

      Thoughts:

      • How? I see graphs and stuff but what am I supposed to learn from them?
      • Overall design looks pretty good.
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      Purpose:
      Cheap accounts in London

      Thoughts:

      • The footer has the best, or most accurate, description -> "Compliance only packages for Small Businesses"
      • "Cheap" is always a race to the bottom. Sell "compliance only" and then tell them the benefit that it is less costly/expensive because...
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      Purpose:
      An easy-to-use website builder tool

      Notes:

      • The Hero section text is confusing. The changing image and text are not noticeable.
      • Make the Hero heading text something simple and straightforward, like "Create beautiful websites easy"
      • Talk about Types of websites Bowwe is best for on the page (not hero)
      • Talk about who Bowwe is made for. Freelance designers, designers who do not code, small biz owners, who?
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        Thanks @calebsylvest for your comment. You got the purpose right and thanks for your valuable remarks, we will think about making changes.

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      Purpose:
      File hosting service...

      Thoughts:

      • The more I read the more confused I got
      • It's file hosting, but for whom? What are the requirements for using it? Is it only for Firebase-related projects? Am I replacing my Dropbox or Google Drive? Is it super secure?
      • Who is the customer. Make it either just for Individuals that want a cloud drive replacement for Dropbox, etc that they own; or make it for Developers that want special tooling to make using Firebase better
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        Ooh interesting thoughts, thanks for the feedback

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      Time mgt app. Looks good!

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      Purpose:
      A blog about messaging apps

      Thoughts:

      • Looks too generic. Needs some unique branding and style.
      • The tags on each article really bother me
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      Tech news website

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      the website where you can buy icons if it matches your icon needs?

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      Purpose:
      An icon set for iOS14

      Thoughts:

      • The style, design, and icons all look really good
      • Needs a lot more icons in the set.
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        Bingo!

        Is my first ever icon set, 😁 I will be adding more, thats the plan.

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          Well congrats, cause they look really good.

          Are the projects listed in the footer yours as well? (i assume)

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            yeah exactly; only that wickedbackgrounds I only designed/built the UI, the hard coding was Gabriel.

            I am missing one which is https://sprezzatura.studio/ but you can see all of them on the link where it says Apes of London :-)

            Edit: Also, thank you for the kind words, really appreciated that today.

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    What's your landing page?