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Post your landing page I'll try to do a design audit for free

Inspired from @iamarsenibragimov and refactoring UI screencasts.

Exactly what the title said, I will recommend easy to do tweaks like type, spacing, etc to make your design & conversion better :)

I am product designer and developer and have been spending a lot of time learning & observing good design.

Edit: Ok this blew up I didn't expected this many comments. Going through each website one by one Thanks!

on May 10, 2020
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    StockAlarm.io - Hit me with your best shot πŸš€

    Thanks again for doing this!

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      Beautiful website (to a noob like me)! I did notice your 'SET ALARMS TO TRACK PRICE MOVEMENTS LIVE.' section moves up and overlaps on mobile though with the top section. Might want to add some padding/margin on that media query break there. :)

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    Hey I'm much more of an engineer than a designer and my landing page is still a work in progress, but I'd love some feedback! http://opsisreader.com
    Thanks!

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    We'd love a design audit if you'd be willing. Thank you!

    Our website is: cruu.io

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      Hey, it's looking pretty good already loved the explainer video here are some changes I would suggest going from top to bottom:

      1. I'll suggest to keep the top header fixed as it is better UX & it'll enable users to signup irrespective of which section they're scrolled to.

      2. Move the content of hero above the video.As It'll set up some context for people. ( a quick rough design for same https://imgur.com/oJBYjD4 ).

      3. (Not design related) Adding some more content like small bullet points in feature section could be good

      4. Adding user images, twitter handles in testimonials can help in increasing trust.

      And yeah that's it. Thanks & good luck for cruu (:

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        @pranjal9599 THANK YOU! And thank you very much for the thoughtful imgur mockup as well. I am sharing your feedback with my business partner. Thank you for doing this on Indie Hackers! I hope you have a great upcoming week.

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      Curious, do you use any service for the video?

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        Hi @horizontech! If I understand your question correctly, we used Unity to create the video. Thank you for looking at our video!

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          Yes. Thanks.

          Cc @weekash

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        Thank you! @ybrickman

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    Thanks for doing this @pranjal9599

    Excited to hear your feedback on my landing page

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    Hey Pranjal, so im a noob to this so i guess im gonna get grilled but hey thats how we grow so im ready to be put on the bbq leadstr.io

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    Hi, my landing page is: https://knowyourworth.site. Thanks for taking your time!

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    mymyriad.ai

    Let me know how I can repay the favor!

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    Hey I be interested in your thoughts! Our website is https://www.seespotlight.com/

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    Hey!
    https://agreemenda.com
    Keen for external feedback. :)

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    Any feedback would be much appreciated! We are launching a consumer brand for runners on Kickstarter so we’re not even selling our product yet. Our efforts right now is to grow our email list. www.vesselathletics.co

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    https://liteflow.com/
    A work in progress. Thanks a lot for your help!

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    https://www.easyhello.co - would love your thoughts! Thanks!

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    I'm the only designer in a company and it's the first landing page for a business. It would be awesome to hear feedback from another designer. Thank you
    https://utires.com/washhands

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    My site is WatchAccuracy.com. Some people don't understand the idea behind it.
    Thanks for your help

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    https://talktomeabout.xyz or something more specific since I assume you like design https://talktomeabout.xyz/design ✌

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      Really liked the design! I noticed the responsiveness in between 750-1100 px (around ipad size) gets weird but is good on desktop and mobile. I'm actually struggling with this myself on making sure my landing page aligns well on different resolutions. It's such a pain!

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        agreed, not sure if optimizing for that is worth the time. Number of users doing that is really low.

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    Sipped iOS App - www.sipped.app (Track what you drink with ease)

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    https://engineeringcollective.io - thanks for taking the time to provide feedback, much appreciated.

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    Great! My page is Rentround.com. Any feedback welcome, please be as brutal as possible! :-)

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    Build websites just using Google Sheets
    https://nocodesheets.carrd.co

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    https://www.jobcull.com Any recommendation would be awesome. I created everything by myself, I'm horrible about color pick and layout.

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      Hey if you struggle with colors you could use coolors.co to get your color scheme

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        My problem is constantly changing it. The never satisfied enough ordeal.

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    Don't know if I've missed the boat here, but would appriecate any feedback! :)
    https://pulse.provinceinnovation.com/

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    Hi, our team will be glad to hear your recommendations.
    Thanks in advance!

    https://www.keepsolid.com/goals/

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    Seodity
    I'm interested in your opinion!

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    Hi, my website is
    https://proxypage.io/

    Thank you!πŸ‘

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    Would love your feedback on FlowCraft

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    Would love your feedback for UpStamps

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      Hey Vitor, It's already looking pretty pretty rad love the color choice and illustrations.

      1. Make the header fixed & change all uppercase links to titlecase.
      2. Organize the copy in hero section it's looking all jumbled up currently. Something like this https://imgur.com/kdsRnXb

      I would say everything else is looking great & yeah that's it.
      Thanks and good luck! :)

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        Hey thanks for the feedback, looks much better, going to improve

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    Your help will be much appreciated!

    https://iamlori.app/

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    Love that you're doing this! Here's my project! Also is the service/ audience easy to understand?

    purplegenie.ca

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    Thank you for the opportunity.

    Here is our landing page:
    https://groupleads.net

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    Would love to have some feedback: https://doctempleapp.com

    Thanks in advance!

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      Hey Jean, I would suggest the following change:

      1. Remove the illustration from header and put form and headings there side by side. Something like this https://imgur.com/VsfHDto ( Sorry could not complete it ). What it'll do is make more people try it.
      2. Change icons in why it's good section ( https://heroicons.dev & https://akveo.github.io/eva-icons/#/ has pretty good icon sets ) and either center align the para or left align everything.
      3. Title case bullet points and maybe used square or rounded square bullets and add in some more text like just a single line instead of single word as currently.
      4. Make Header fixed change all caps links text to titlecase.

      And basically that's it. Thanks & Good Luck! :)

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    https://pikaso.me

    Updated it yesterday so really appreciate the feedback 😁

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    Hope things are going well Pranjal, excellent background and work.
    Possible for you to review the below site?

    https://pixeltests.com
    Interview Practice tests for Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning

    Thanks, Jay

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      Hey Jay I would suggest following changes:

      1. Split the hero heading into two lines currently it's very long and spanning across the whole width, Increase Emphasis on CTA i.e take the test. Little idea on how you might want to do it https://imgur.com/6i6CMoK

      2. Increase the line height on large paragraphs, it'll give it more breathing room and will make it easier to read overall.

      3. Work on spacing in features section like try to make all change position to make same height element in one row.

      4. Add some border radius on images & pricing cards

      Thanks and good luck! :)

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      Hey Hannah I would suggest the following design changes:

      1. Add illustration to add visual interest to the page. A quick mockup idea https://imgur.com/gl3j4ha ( You can find the same illustration on https://www.opendoodles.com )
      2. Change the blue & grey shades to that of brand color.
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        I love what you have done here! Love the image and colours. Thank you! I am also trying to optimise for mobile and bring the search bar to homepage.

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    Hello! This is our new digital marketing agency landing page, I'll love to recieve feedback from you 😎

    Site:
    http://2dmente.com/digital

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    Hey pranjal9599,
    We are about to go public and every improvement is welcome!
    Here's our site:
    https://www.storagequery.com/
    Thanks in advance

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      Hey valdir, nice concept here are some changes i would suggest:

      1. Remove shadows from headings & Button texts. Shadow on text should be used only if there is low contrast between the foreground text & bg.

      2. Increase white space in hero section.

      3. Use softer shadows harsh black shadows don't look very appealing. https://brumm.af/shadows is a great tool that might help to generate better shadows.

      4. Make the three cards of equal height in for users that want to section

      5. Increase weight of headings in all about section.

      Thanks & good luck :)

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    I would love to get your ferdback on www.podstellar. com :-) thanks!

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    I always appreciate constructive input on https://lakebed.io.

    Thanks!

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      Hello, You should consider the following changes:

      1. Remove the illustration from hero section and add video instead. RN illustration as it is not adding much value to it. Something like this https://imgur.com/a/DZrcXhi

      2. Use more bright red currently red used throughout is looking dull.

      3. Make the three sections under why choose of same height you might manipulate current body text there to make them of equal height. Also left align the icon and text. When you've more than 2-3 lines of text left alignment also works best. ( https://heroicons.dev you can also try replacing the icons with these ones )

      4. In the individual features section use a 2 col equal width grid. It'll make it look much more organized. Also increasing the font size of individual feature heading could create better hierarchy.

      And that's it! Thanks and good luck for lakebed :)

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        Thanks so much! Great ideas, I'll likely do all.

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    Thanks for this. https://aliceapp.ai awaits your critique.

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      Hey, great concept and great content overall. I would suggest following changes:

      1. Change the font to some sans-serif font ( Inter, Roboto, SF or anything else ). Monospace fonts don't work well with body copy.

      2. Organize the hero section better. Currently it lacks proper heirarchy. ( a quick mockup on how you can make it better https://imgur.com/uiSWVfe )

      3. Emphasize Transcribe Now section by putting it in card and giving it a drop shadow and increasing the padding between Transcribe now heading and paragraph below.

      4. Make how it works section two column instead of center aligned right now it looks pretty empty with lots of available horizontal space. I would suggest moving image to one side and content to one. And also increase their font sizes a bit.

      And that's it :) Thanks!

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        Solid feedback and the mockup is great. Thanks.

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          @pranjal9599 i updated the site and incorporated your feedback too. Check it out https://aliceapp.ai.

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