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Postcard Critique

Hi,

I launched cutchamp.com, it's intended for steel fabricator to be able to estimate and respond to requests for quote on jobs. I have a lot of the main functionality completed (MVP) and am trying to get visitors so that I can move out of the MVP phase. To that end I have design a postcard that I would like to send out to the businesses. If you could take a look and critique it, I would appreciate it!

on January 7, 2020
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    One suggestion, Hatcher01: consider trimming the explainer line down to "Cutchamp: modern software for metals fabrication" and put it somewhere on the front side of the postcard instead of the back. I was struggling for context at first glance and this line would ground the reader so they wouldn't be disoriented trying to make sense of the cool sounding features without knowing what Cutchamp exactly is right off the bat. Hope that helps. Also, cool logo! :)