Pre-launch landing page - Looking for feedback!
Hey guys,
Would be great to get some feedback on our landing page, which you can find here - https://inqu.is/
More specifically, I'd love to know:
- Is the overall proposition clear to you?
- What questions are you left with, if any?
- Does the quote at the end work for now? We want something else there eventually (e.g. a testimonial), but just seeing if it'll do for now
Any other feedback or suggestions for a better format would be really welcome too.
Thanks
Honestly I think the landing page is great. It's clear what you offer and who you target.
The only thing I am missing is a rough estimate of the price and how the end result looks like.
So, do I create these surveys myself or is this part of your service? Do I then get the result of the survey & the email address? How does the pricing work? Is it per match? Finally, what do you think will the price range be?
I am well aware that it's probably hard to answer all these questions in detail at an early stage, but the more you could share could help me get a better picture.
Great feedback, thanks. We've actually tested an initial pricing model, so we can put that up.
Good point re the results too - will clarify that.
Thanks again.
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Hi @rcalvert,
Your idea is interesting,
I would prefer to see a sample of what I would get at the end. So that it's attractive to signup early.
The bottom part of the page about you looks more attractive that the top part of the page, maybe you can improve on the colors or add an image on the top.
All the best.
Great, thanks for the feedback. Will get that sample in, and see if we can improve the top part visually.
I like the idea Rob. As an entrepreneur, you always want to validate your idea against your market to really figure out how to move forward (if at all).
The value prop seemed clear to me. I didn't get a sense of how quickly I'd get back results or if this service is a manual or automated process ("Our team of dedicated analysts will..." or "Our specially designed algorithms will...".
I would say the final quote is OK. In my view, a quote should be more personal. Like "As an entrepreneur myself, there's nothing more valuable than validating your idea with a complete stranger. It's brutal honesty at its finest. We at Inquis.....blah blah blah.
Good luck!
Thanks chowsan. Solid, measured feedback - appreciate the reply
Hey Rob. I think I understand the problem that you're trying to solve. I love how you specify that it's for B2B companies. I was thinking to build something live that.
I have more feedback. I’ll be more than happy to give you my detailed thoughts.
Me and my partner will be giving personal real-time feedback in a video chat for this whole week to help other founders.
Check out http://flounders.io/ for the details.
Hope to see you there.
P.S.: Anyone who wants to get feedback is also welcomed 👍