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Provide feedback for my landing page

by diogod

Hi,

I am working on a new service and i just launched the landing page.

statuscrawl.com

I would appreciate any feedback if the message is clear and if it offers a good value proposition.

Let me know what needs improvements or if a need to provide more value for potencial customers to engage. Soon i will add a subscribe so i can notify users when its ready!

Would you be in interest of testing it? Thanks! :)

diogod's avatardiogod
on April 9, 2020
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    @ddxtreme

    I like it. Some thoughts

    • Traditional copy form is Heading and Subheading
    • Your landing page image doesn't tell the story powerfully, it's nice but not great
    • Use logos of the services your system integrates with and notifies
    • Introduce two short testimonials
    • Capture the pain / cost of missing a notification

    I made a flowchart that helps you identify your opportunities to increase landing page conversion which you should follow https://www.roastmylandingpage.com/landing-page-conversion

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    Hey @ddxtreme

    Your product looks very interesting!!

    Feedback:

    • It takes some time to load your site, maybe it's my issue.
    • Like the 1st screenshot, would be awesome to see more product demonstration
    • Keen to know the before / after benefits as well

    I'm also re-designing my site, your advice would be helpful!

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      hey @andelob, thank you for the input! It surely makes sense.
      I wanted to just ship what i have now and then do some improvements, specially on copy and add more content.

      Yes, you got the problem right. You have a lot of "up time" services but i wanted one that could centralize everything in a simple, easy to setup dashboard. Future roadmap entails that we extend the ability to add any url to check, it can be your app, an api, etc.

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