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Hey @lee_136,
Congrats on the project!
A few impressions and thoughts about the landing page:
The H1 does not clearly communicate what the app is about. "Too many thoughts?" makes me think the app is about peace of mind and something more along those lines. The problem you address is having "too many thoughts". Yet the app seems to be about organizing them. So you might want to try a headline that refers to that, the issue of not having an easy way to organize/keep track/record your thoughts.
Not sure about the whole question/answer structure for the H1. I guess this should be A/B tested. I normally would just go straight to the point and state the benefit the app gives.
The sub-heading is much better in terms of communicating what this is about.
The header needs some work: The CTA text talks about a community, but the H1 talks about an app. If the product is the app, your CTA should link to Signing up or Downloading it. And the branding is inconsistent. What's the relation between Thoughts Journal and Pentime? Is that the old app name?
The product pictures made me think the product is a calendar app. You might consider updating them with something that describes the core function/benefit from the product.
I'm not sure how the 3D decorative icons (the cube and the triangle) help. Maybe just remove them? They take away some attention from the content and not in a good way.
The text in English has typos and grammar errors. You might want to fix these as it kind of gets in the way. It does not help associate trust or a sense of quality to the product.
My 2 cents :)
Best of luck! 💪
Thank you a lot for the feedback, It's really helpful!
I like that you've got videos showcasing the experience in the app because I think the visualization can really help people see whether this would be a good fit for them. But that section is a little overwhelming because there are so many videos autoplaying next to each other, and each one is so small that it is hard to see what's actually happening. Perhaps a single larger video would be more compelling, or you could use short, simple gifs that can be larger instead of a full video that has to be inside a video player?