Rate my B2B landing page!
I managed to do a massive rate post where I rated others landing pages, and got a lot more than expected (sorry if I didn't get around to it).
Would greatly appreciate any feedback for my B2B collaboration tool landing page!
Hi there Luca!
The desktop site looks great, very well thought out and the messaging is very clear.
Images are very descriptive which is great - I'd maybe think about making the first one a gif or screen rec so that you see a bit more straight away, as going through the whole page I'm still not 100% sure what the experience would actually look like.
You're missing a bit of social proof which I appreciate can be tough when in Beta, but any opportunity to put testimonials from real people in will help add some credibility to the statements you're making.
The mobile site ends up much poorer by comparison because you lose so many of the images and the spacing is really strange - I'd put some serious effort into the mobile breakpoints, especially as one of your claims is to be cross-device friendly.
Copywriting wise, there is a lot of duplication.
'Creative Collaboration tool'
'Collaborate... creative... review'
'Collaborate... creative... reviewing'
All in the first three sections of text. The more text you add the more potential confusion or visual overwhelm you can create, so keep things as short and concise as you can.
Hope that helps! Please feel free to get in touch if you'd like a more comprehensive review with some user testing.
Hello Meri.
Thank you very much for the detailed response and tips, those are all much appreciated! I will definitely put more effort into the mobile version to bring it all together and provide the same experience as desktop, just on a smaller screen.
Once again I appreciate your kind words and criticism :)