👋 Rate my landing page
Hey everybody,
I have read good advice in this group, and would love your advice.
This is my March project - a todo list that comes with a project manager.
The product: I will call users once a week to go through and clean up their todo list.
I can see this being a very helpful service for the right person. As an introverted coder, though, you won't believe the lengths I'll go to to avoid an in-person call 😅
I really like the name, the domain, and the overall design of the landing page.
In my opinion, "I will call users once a week to go through and clean up their todo list" does way more to explain what your product is than the landing page itself. I totally understand wanting to dress it up and make it sound like more than a one person operation. But I would consider leaning into that aspect of it, at least in the early stages. (I see that you've got your name in the footer. I would emphasise your role more though.)
Early adopters might be more trusting if they know they'll be getting some personal assistance from the founder of the service.
My copy nitpicks:
Comma between "weekly progress" and "celebrate wins".
"15 Minute Todobud Into" -> "15 Minute Todobud Intro"
Whoa, thanks for the detailed response!
During my first programming job, we ran out of office space and desks so my team had to work out of a conference room. It turned out to be great, there was instant help from the team and pull requests were reviewed on a huge tv screen so they comments were live.
Ever since then I've craved a similar experience, so much so, that I've hired virtual assistants to be my "rubber duck". I would simply lay out my plan, milestones, questions and stuff and they would check out on them later on. I'd be happy to try this with you if you are open.
I agree, "I will call users once a week to go through and clean up their todo list" is shorter and clearer.
Thanks for the notes.