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Rate my landing page

Please give me some landing page feedback:

Website: https://www.sherpa.sh

Technologies used:

  • Next.js
  • React
  • Tailwinds
  • Shadcn
  • Obsession with comic book art

Too quirky? Or just right?
Compelling copy? or off the mark?

Thanks community!

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Landing Page Feedback
on September 24, 2025
  1. 1

    Your art direction is strong. The leak is probably "attention split" not aesthetics.

    Fast conversion test:

    1. Keep one CTA text site-wide (“Start free” or “Book demo” — pick one).
    2. Add a 3-line “Who this is for / not for” block under hero.
    3. Put a mini-proof row before features (logo, stat, or 1 customer quote).

    If helpful I can do a 5-minute screen-record roast with exact copy/UI edits in order. $1 beta:
    https://roastmysite.io/go.php?src=ih_followup_l003_20260312

  2. 1

    Love the visual style — one thing that usually lifts trial starts fast is reducing “is this clickable?” doubt.

    Quick test:

    1. Keep exactly one primary CTA color/style.
    2. Use neutral styling for non-clickable cards/tiles.
    3. Add one tiny proof strip under hero CTA (e.g. “setup in 5 min”, “no card required”, or real usage stat).

    If useful, I can do a $1 quick roast with exact edit order (hero → CTA hierarchy → proof stack): https://roastmysite.io/go.php?src=ih_l003_20260312

  3. 1

    Quick conversion fix you can test today:

    If an element is clickable, make it look clickable (contrast + hover state + button shape).
    If it’s not clickable, remove button styling.

    Ambiguity creates hesitation, and hesitation kills first-click intent.

    A clean pattern is one primary CTA style + one secondary style, repeated consistently across the page.

  4. 2

    Styling looks great! It's not always clear what's clickable and what isn't though. Your primary CTA colours are also being used for graphic elements and elements that look clickable but aren't. The CTAs don't stand out as a result, which is bad for sales, and it's also probably going to confuse and frustrate users which could lead to lack of trust, drop offs etc.

    e.g. on the "Spend less time optimizing cloud spend" table, the colour of the highlighted area is the same as the button above it, which will likely make users think the different tiers are clickable, but they aren't.

    Same for the tiles underneath - the pricing is clickable but the others aren't and they're treated in the same way stylistically.

    You could run a heat mapping test on the site to confirm, but you'll likely find users are clicking on lots of areas you don't want them to click on.

    Hope that makes sense - best of luck with it! Love the styling. I offer full UX audits for startups / small businesses if you're interested at Check My UX.

    1. 1

      Hey thank you for this feedback! It's very helpful. We will take a look at constrast and making the CTAs way more obvious to click. (and thank you for the kind words on the styling). If we need a full audit I'll definitely keep you in mind.

      1. 1

        No problem at all! It looks great :)

  5. 1

    It looks really neat and unique.
    Smooth UI - check
    Clear value - check(actually double check, because I see end-user and business values)
    Free tier to explore - check

    Small flaw: when you click the very first CTA, it leads you to sign up, but you cannot go back to explore the page a little bit more

  6. 1

    The layout is solid and the features are clear — that’s the easy part. What usually moves the needle more is the visitor’s first emotional reaction. Right now, the page explains what you do, but it doesn’t immediately answer: “Why should I care today?”

    Highlighting a single, tangible outcome — like the time saved, mistakes avoided, or immediate benefit — before diving into features can reduce hesitation dramatically. That first “aha” moment is often what separates clicks from bounces.

    Once that’s felt, the rest of the copy usually converts much better without redesigning anything.

  7. 1

    I agree with the comment already posted that it is unclear where you can click and where you cannot. Overall, it looks very good.

  8. 1

    Salut,
    Je me présente : je suis spécialisé en CRO (Conversion Rate Optimization), c’est-à-dire l’art d’optimiser les conversions sur le web.

    En ce moment, je propose un accompagnement complètement gratuit pour les landing pages. Concrètement, je fais un audit de ta landing page et je te donne des conseils concrets, à court et à long terme, pour booster tes conversions, le tout basé sur des recherches et des tests éprouvés.

    Je propose ce service gratuitement à condition que :
    1.tu utilises mes conseils,
    2.tu me donnes un retour,
    3.tu laisses un avis si tu trouves que ça le mérite,
    4.ta page ait plus de 4 000 visiteurs/mois.

    N’hésite pas à me dire si tu veux que je t’aide, ou si tu connais quelqu’un qui pourrait en avoir besoin. Merci pour ton attention et passe une excellente journée. tu peut me contacter a l'adresse: [email protected] o m

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