Rate my Landing Page - Don't Tread Lightly
Hi All!
I'm currently working on a platform to connect users with experts providing professional advice in a variety of different areas - from entrepreneurial guidance to everyday help. I won't say more because I hope the landing page does that for me...
Here are the two current versions:
a. Wyzr-a: wyzr.me/user-a/
b. Wyzr-b: wyzr.me/user-b/
I would appreciate any feedback and please don't go easy on me!
I’m a millennial and my attention span of 1.5s is being tested with the long sentences and filler words in version A. Would appreciate less sales and more info nugget to really drive home what, for who, why, when.
As far as color and design language goes, that’ll depend on your target demographic and brand message you want to convey.
Thank you for the feedback!
@kbailas I personally wasn't a fan of the lack of humanity to your page, it feels very cartoonish and the color for version A is super weird...here's a feedback video I made for you
Thank you for your feedback! We'll make sure to take on your improvement suggestions.
Late to the party, but I like what is shipped. Maybe make the h1 a bit bigger (5rem)? Also there is a trend to have a "primary" and "secondary" button style. Primary is the one you most want people to click. In this case, is that "Discover Experts" or "Join As An Expert"?