I like making weekly updates to my website and then letting IndieHackers give me even more tips to improve. I think it's nice to show how to improve a website over time while getting valuable feedback.
Previous Version
Current Version
Changes I've made:
- Updated the hero text to be more descriptive and value-driven
- Added another logo for more social proof
- Changed the section headers to be more attractive and relevant to the reader instead of descriptive
- Updated the Bot intro screenshot and included a link to the demo video underneath
- Added "Free standard plan for 2 weeks!" under the free tier to entice a signup
- Added Twitter & LI images/links into the footer for more self-linking, social proof, and a more professional touch
Let me know what you think about the changes and any other suggestions on how I can improve my landing page!
Thanks,
Matt
I'm liking the improvement, but a red flag jumps out at me with the initial headline.
"Give your team a safe space."
That should most likely be changed. If it's not "safe" to give your opinion in your company then you might want to look for a less-hostile environment that allows for your feedback to help improve the culture and products.
I get what you're saying. I guess my thought is that even in a non-hostile working environment you could still want a safe space to share your honest thoughts. It can be awkward to say something to your CEO or the founder of your company. Even if the comment is true and it's non-hostile it's easier to say nothing than to put yourself out there
I understand the goal you are going for. So keep that part up!
It's a pretty good page IMHO
Thanks!