Re-did our landing page. How is this? Any improvements?
Hello IH. We did a third iteration of our landing page and this one has been the most effort intensive so far.
The idea was to build a more cohesive story while trying to explain the product better than before, given that we weren't able to drive many conversions with our previous version of the page.
Would love to get your thoughts. Our next step is to run some online marketing experiments to see if it converts. So this feedback will be critical for us.
Please see it here - https://www.asmi.io.
And of course, if you are a freelancer and want to try it out, I'd love to provide a special offer and get you on board... 🙂
Thank you.
Very strong structure sense. Well done @maheshj
I really like the mint accent color, maybe use more to make the readability better?
I’d like to hear your feedback on my landing page too www.ventureslist.com
Thank you @felix12777. I'd love to use the mint color more to make it a bit more playful, but it wasn't looking quite right whenever I tried to incorporate it. I'll give it a shot again.
Really nice page you got there. I noticed you also used the mint... 🙂
I wouldn't change much although the mint color for text is actually hampering the readability for me. Looks like you've done a lot of work collecting the data.
It would be really helpful to see which funds or accelerators are currently accepting applications and which areas/domains they invest in so that it's easier to narrow down to the right folks.
Your "How it works" section looks like a footer. Fonts not included in the image export, and maybe a demo above the fold.
Overall the design looks nice!
Thank you @klaaz0r. I'll look into the
how it workssection. I didn't understand your point about fonts in image export. Possible to share a screenshot of what you are seeing?Hey @klaaz0r. nvm. I realized that you are referring to the SVG images. I'll look into it. Thank you.