Researched the pet-care space for months, built an app to fill the biggest gap, now live on the App Store — feedback wanted

I do not own a pet, so I will leave your first two questions to people who do and take the third one. I looked at the listing rather than the app, because that is my corner.

Your name and subtitle share no words, which is right and which almost nobody gets right. "Pet Health, Dog Training: Tavi" plus "Cat Care & Vet Records, Puppy" covers dog, cat, vet, training, records and puppy without spending a character twice. Apple indexes a word once, so duplication buys nothing, and you avoided it.

The subtitle does read as if it got cut off though. It ends on "Puppy" with nothing after it. That trailing word is still indexed, so you have not lost search value, but the subtitle is also the second line a human reads under your icon, and on an app with no ratings yet it is one of the few things carrying trust. A phrase that ends cleanly and holds the same terms would cost you nothing.

One thing for when Android opens up: Play indexes the full description and has no hidden keyword field, so the copy that earns its keep on iOS does not transfer. That catches people who ship one listing to both stores.

I have put your listing into our own system to look at it properly, which means pulling the terms it currently ranks for and the search demand behind them. That takes about a day. If it is useful to you I will come back on this thread with what it shows, no strings.

I work on ASOScan, so treat that as a bias.

The combination of certificate scanning, longitudinal health records, and vet-ready exports makes this more than a simple reminder app. I’m curious which of those use cases is getting the strongest response from early users.