Revamped LP based on IH feedback - back for round 2
Hi IH,
I posted TribePulse's landing page a while back , and the main feedback I got was to add more product screenshots. I've done this plus alot more and am ready for round 2.
Don't hold back! Any and all feedback is welcome!
I'll be honest, I don't really get what it is you're selling. It looks like some sort of forum for company intranets, but what is the value? What is the problem you're trying to solve? And how does this do that better than the alternatives?
The headline is too vague. It seems to imply that teams don't put any thought into other communications, which comes off as a bit insulting.
The supporting sections are also vague. Explain how exactly the product delivers the benefits you're claiming.
Hope that helps.
Thanks for the feedback 😊
TribePulse is an internal discussion forum targeted at improving team productivity. To that end, the problem being solved is the chaos and inefficiency in the way most teams currently prefer to communicate.
I had cut down the words in the supporting sections as they seemed too wordy previously. But seems I may have cut too much 😅
Few thoughts on going through the landing page
If you need some brainstorming with this feel free to reach out to me via email.
Thank you for the detailed feedback!
Agree that the page could do with some more colour!
When you say huge scope of improvement on the visual front, do you have any examples I could reference?
The visual direction of slite is something I think is very good, and on the flow of content notion does an amazing job. Referenced both as they are in the collab space.
Looks good. I think a little more space between the features might work well.
Noted - will change the spacing on the index to match the product page