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Revealing my new product! πŸš€

Hey there IH, I'm launching the landing page of my new product today. It'd be much appreciated if you could check it out and roast it.

https://circle-back.com/

on February 11, 2020
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    Hello Trent. Roast it? No need to be so harsh. Even though I don't do sales, I have some thoughts.
    What's the catch? We want to provide the live feedback so that you'll get more out of it and will be able to ask questions.

    Want to do it today? Flounders.io

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    Bring up who it's for and the problem you solve for them further up the page. The first few paragraphs could be for a number of solutions in the market. Clearly stand out. (Note: you have all the components. they are just laid out on the page in different places).

    You state who it might not be for, but I would flip that all around to who it would be for and bring that further up the page... like waay up!

    From what I read sounds like if someone believes that following up 12 times is πŸ”‘ then it's for them. What else would someone need to believe?

    I see a note on integrations, but they are in the future... Put the first one you are launching with as this will be important.

    Overall - truncate copy. Make it tighter for rev1 and then as you grow you can expand the copy. The tighter the better for the visitor so they can quickly look at it and say: this is perfect for me, or nope, I'm out of here!
    Best of luck!

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    The landing page looks great! I don't think I have any complaints to give honestly, I'll be saving it as an example of what I'll shoot for with my landing pages.

    Great stuff, and wishing you the best with your product!

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    Very nice @trentguillory - the BEST "not sexy" product I've seen so far. Solves a problem and you just "get it" from the first 5 seconds of reading. :)

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    I believe I understand the product in the first 10 seconds. Looks good!

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    No idea what the app does after scrolling down to the bottom and reading the paragraphs ?
    is it CALL SCHEDULE App Reminder ? or something !