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Review my landing page?

Hi,
I recently released AstroIP.co, it is a an IP Geolocation API.

I put a lot of effort on building the landing page, since I wanted to emphasize the entire set of data exposed by the API in the best way possible.

I would love any feedback at all!

https://astroip.co

What you think?

on November 14, 2020
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    The landing page looks cool and straightforward.

    I'm curious, what platform are you using to manage affiliates?

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      Thanks for the good feedback!

      Re the affiliates, at the moment it would be managed manually, but once I get some paying customers i can switch to third party platforms.

      I heard good feedback about:
      https://www.getrewardful.com/
      and
      https://firstpromoter.com/

      But I have not actually used them myself.

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        Awesome!

        If you are looking for a single platform to launch, recruit, manage, and pay affiliates, we built https://partnerable.io

        I have just sent more details to you via email.

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    I can't comment much on the service itself.
    The landing page itself looks awesome: super clean, easy to navigate, easy on the eyes. Really nice :)

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      Thanks a lot for your feedback! I put quite a lot of effort on making it clean and simple.

      This should hopefully increase conversion.

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    Hey @dev_bre I look at your landing page. I see that you put a lot of eefort in it and I love it. I find it interesting for the most part.

    Here are some suggestion:
    IP Geolocation and threat intelligence API ------- Threat intelligence API
    Fast and highly scalable IP Geolocation API ------ highly scalable IP Geolocation API

    I see that you have a lot of features, but I can not see why I should buy your product. How would I make my customers experience more appealing with this service? What problems do I have in order to need that service?

    Let me know what you think

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      Even this is way too vague @Felice.

      For now, I can't point out the best headline because of all the technical jargon, and multiple features.

      From what I can distill it all down to I see it's a software (I think) that helps you keep track or your website visitors and direct targeted campaigns and advertisements to them.

      I might be wrong but I'll advice you @dev_bre to get a copywriter and have a long talk detailing all your features and it's benefits.

      For now, this is not clear enough.

      Best,
      Joseph.

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      Thanks for your feedback!
      I thought adding the Use Cases section would answer the question: why should I use your service?

      Do you think I should structure that section differently?

      Can you give me an example if what you would like to see to provide the missing info you are referring to?

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        You should put the problem the customer have at the beginning and showing your product as a solution.

        If I am looking at a product to personalize user experience.
        I land on your page and after reading all the feature. I finally see that you can help me with my problem.

        Do you see what I mean?

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          Hi,
          I shuffled things around a bit and added additional info to the homepage.

          This should cover your feedback as well.

          What you think?

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            Yes it's better.

            I feel like it does not have reach it's true potential.
            If you want I can show you it's true potential.

            I am a SaaS copywriter. I like to help people reach their true conversion rate.

            Send me an email
            felice.ineza@gmail.com