Review of my (first) landing page
Hi Indie Hackers 👋
I created my landing page. It's the first time for me and I'd love to have your feedback. Is the product clear enough? Do you see the value? Is it catchy? How can I optimize?
https://www.notionfitnesstracker.com/
Thank you so much! :)
Would you be interested in selling on flurly? I think this product is high quality enough to be featured on the home page :)
Thank you so much for your feedback! Yes i'm interested, and i'd love to be featured on the home page :)
https://flurly.com/p/notionfitnesstracker
I love it. Super clean and elegant. Great job!
I just happened to have launched a service just recently around feedback (and landing pages is one aspect) 😊
I enjoy simple ideas with great execution. A few questions to help frame your landing page.
→ What is it for? (i.e. the goal of the landing page - to sell, inform, entertain, email opt-in, something else)
* Is there anything on the page that does NOT support that goal?
→ Who specifically is this landing page for? Who are you trying to entice? (Be very specific, not just some thing like “fitness enthusiast”)
* Why would they perform the call to action you seek?
* What type of person are they?
* Does your landing page answer all their doubts?
Notion is a great product, cool idea. Good luck!
Btw if you need a beta tester for your service, i'd be glad to help
Wow, thanks @chaddeus for your helpful answer 😉. All these questions are very relevant, i'm going to review my landing page with that in mind
No problem. Good luck!
Hi Sandrine,
Just reviewed your landing page.
Hope this helps.
It helps a lot! Thanks for your review ;)