Reworked landing page after we got our first paying customer. Share your feedback.
Got our first paid customer last week. Fortunately, we could get a note of all features that excites him over a demo.
With the points taken, we reworked sections that closely fit his workflow and made it live.
If you use Twitter bookmarks a lot this might be a fit for you, please leave down your honest feedback after reviewing the site.
Hi Karthikeyan,
Congrats on landing your first customer - many more to come.
The product looks good. I can relate my twitter bookmarks are a mess as well.
Here's a short feedback on your landing page:
Hope you find the comments useful :)
Thanks, Ammar for taking the time to write it down.
Working on cutting down the content, I felt the same & thinking about changing the design for the content or cutting it down. Will work it out.
Do you feel that it's too dark? It would be helpful to know if should I reduce the saturation of black or if you work on a light theme.
Thanks for the suggestion. Also would like to know, does the banner animation is able to convey what the product does. Maybe with that information, I can think of a way to work on this
I would say try with with a light background.
Not sure about animations - on my screen there's nothing animating. The hero image with 3 columns ( Bookmark | Writing | The resulting image) are half loading. It's the same under (Time To read). I'm guessing you have embedded tweets there which are not showing up (not sure though).
The headline sufficiently informs about the product. You could improve it by adding the benefits in the subhead [e.g. Get organized. Get inspired / Easy to read. Easy to digest] something along those lines.
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The first social proof is excellent! (the name, follower count and the testimonial - top notch)
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The RECIPE (where you are talking about the features) is wordy. Let's take the first one and reduce it as an example.
[Streamline your content inspirations
Analyze writing styles of your favorite authors, select the topic you follow the most, and set a filter.]
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Take control of your curated tweets (where you're showing a glimpse of the outcome) is good.
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Time to read section (I like the concept behind it but not sure of the execution - at least not loading on my end).
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MASH & INTEGRATIONS sections are clear!
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"Organize, search & manage bookmarks with ease" section - this feels like a clutter. May be keep each title under it at equal image size.
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Call to action is fine as well.
Hope this helps. And feel free to msg or email me for anything else.
Thanks a lot, Ammar for writing it down in detail. This helps me understand the areas I need to fill up.
I will try to cut down the message and get back to you via email or message if possible.
Again, thanks a lot for your time.
no problem :)