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Reworked Value Proposition

Hey Indiehackers,

My team and I reworked the wording for Neatro's homepage. We hope that the value proposition is more clear. If you guys have any time, we would love to get some feedback.

https://www.neatro.io/

Thank you!

on January 26, 2020
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    Hey @MichaudC the website is well designed.

    I'm curious, do you expect visitors to understand Retrospective, Agile and Scrum when they land your site?

    I can see you spent 3 blocks to mention these terminologies, but is it really necessary?

    After that, I visit your features page. It is impressive, I would rather see that page as your landing page.

    I understand as an Agile, Scrum (or another framework) professionals, you want to promo the methodology. Ask yourself, is it something people really want or you expect more sign ups to come :)

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    I don't fully understand how the product works until I see the Features page, though I'm lost at the image under "Collect comments in app and never lose information".

    And if you want to show how simple Neatro is, I think it's better to show the content of Features page on the landing page instead. The words are clearer and shorter to digest.

    All the best, Christopher!

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    Good VP. Is this your USP:

    "We offer you a selection of templates so you can always find the right retrospective. Our boards are updated in real-time so your team can collaborate easily even while working remotely."

    ?

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      Hey cOnsilience,

      Our templates are part of our USP. Also, the UX and the historical data of your team's retrospectives kept in the application are some differentiators we have.

      Cheers!

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        Bases = covered. 😉

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    I would put the large graphic of the app that is currently near the middle of the features page on the homepage instead of the current homepage graphic. I'm interested in your team, but after viewing the homepage, I still had no idea what it was you offered.
    Also, your audience knows what retrospectives are, so no need to explain on homepage (at least not so high up).

    Peace out.. 😉

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      Hey Mathias,

      I agree that we might explain a bit too much. I will also give our designer the feedback on the graphic for the home page.

      Thank you for the feedback!