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Rewrote my landing page. Does it resonate with you?

https://ulluminate.com started completely wrong.

I built a service that didn't solve a real pain...
I viewed it as a product, when it was a project...
I wrote a landing page that focused on product features, and not customer pain points...

And I learned a ton!

After reading Ca$vertising and Building a StoryBrand, I knew I needed to change around my landing page to focus on pain points people have with social media and information sharing. I also included customer testimonials and example collections so you can see the product straight away. My only concern now is the pain points listed with information sharing today. I know they are a pain for me, but are they strong enough pain points for others?

So, does the new landing page resonate with you?
If not, what would make you want to join?

(Also don't judge my "Premium" page just yet. That ones next 😀)

Thanks for the #landingpagefeedback!

on October 31, 2019
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    1. Where are the screenshots of the app? I want to see the product before getting it.
    2. What about mobile devices? I mostly read on my phone. Any mobile app now or in the future? Tell me.
    3. The landing page looks much better if you zoom out to 75%.
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      1. I tried to solve for this with the clickable collections at the bottom. I was hoping people would jump straight into a "collection", which is the bookmarking experience, but maybe it would be better to show it.
      2. Yes hoping for a mobile app in the future.
      3. I'll experiment with tightening up the margins a bit.

      Thanks for all the feedback!