😬 Roast Blurry Landing Page 😱

This is great Ali! Really simple and strong benefit, the video is great and the page has just enough info that the user knows exactly what they'll get.
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I'd recommend using sentence case rather than title case (capitals on the start of every word) as for anything longer than about 4-5 words it's actually quite hard to read.
you're missing 'a' in your header. "...with a single click" (also in the video but it's less important there as the narrator says it)
"Here's how it works and offers" as a title on the video doesn't make sense. I'd just remove 'and offers' from the end of that sentence.

Great work though honestly!

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This is great Ali! Really simple and strong benefit, the video is great and the page has just enough info that the user knows exactly what they'll get.
Three TINY comments
- I'd recommend using sentence case rather than title case (capitals on the start of every word) as for anything longer than about 4-5 words it's actually quite hard to read.
- you're missing 'a' in your header. "...with a single click" (also in the video but it's less important there as the narrator says it)
- "Here's how it works and offers" as a title on the video doesn't make sense. I'd just remove 'and offers' from the end of that sentence.
Great work though honestly!
Meri_Earthfound

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5 years ago
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