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Roast my early access landing page. Is it clear what the product does?

https://dashlook.app
submitted this linkon September 27, 2021
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    I would say it is not only clear what the purpose is - it conveys the main features very effortlessly. It's clear you spent a good amount of time on thinking this through..overall looking good. Best of luck!

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      Wow, really appreciate it, thank you!

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      I agree, having an icon would look more appealing, and would help to indicate what is what. Thank you for the suggestion!

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    It is hard to find what is the name of your app. In the header, there is "Launcher for your Git workflow" so I can assume that your project is called Launcher. But the website name is dashlook - I can only see that name and logo at the bottom of the page. Maybe it will be a promising idea to present it in more places to build awareness of your brand?

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      Good point! I first had the logo at the top, but it was a bit distracting, considering I want the eyes on the CTA, so I removed it. I am not sure how effective the whole brand awareness thing is, but I will consider bringing it back. Thank you for the suggestion!

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    Looks amazing, only change I would make - make the large image at the top animated to show how you'd use it, I guess you can use some animation library and your mockups to make it!

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      I tried to play a bit with a short repeating video, but I think the result was a bit confusing because it's pretty hard to represent key presses (even with subtitles). However, once I have more functionality implemented in the app, I will probably do a full demo video that can be played manually. Thank you for your feedback!