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Roast my first landing page

by Zachary Warnes
https://immersion-ai.com/

Hey IH,

I put together my first-ever landing page for my Chrome extension Immersion AI.

This is my first time building a landing page. I'd wager I made some obvious mistakes I'm unaware of.

I'd love to know if it's clear what Immersion AI does and its value.

Thanks!

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submitted this linkon June 3, 2023
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    I would increase the font size a bit, it's quite small to read comfortably.

    Also try to increase the quality of images, they are a bit grainy.
    Maybe some vector mockups that mimic those screenshots would be better?

    stefa_no's avatar stefa_no
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      Thanks! I didn't think people would still be responding to this post, I really appreciate the feedback.

      Zachary Warnes's avatar Zachary Warnes
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      3 years ago
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        You're welcome ;) hehe! I just signed up and I was looking around for interesting threads

        stefa_no's avatar stefa_no
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    Congrats on your project!
    I left some ideas what I would change here https://visualdebug.com/show/immersion-ai.com

    StanD's avatar StanD
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    3 years ago
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      Thanks for the feedback, the visual debug definitely helps for this kind of work

      Zachary Warnes's avatar Zachary Warnes
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      3 years ago
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    Hello there,

    I'm seeing you page on mobile right now and here is what I think. I really like the general structure of the page, the way you structured the images with the texts is great.

    However, I think you should change the font family to something a little bit less sharp, it will make it more professional I think. Also, on mobile the logo and the text next to it should be aligned (I think) maybe if you decrease the size of the logo it should be better! :))

    But generally speaking your landing page looks great to start with. :))

    MrData's avatar MrData
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    3 years ago
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      Thanks for the feedback!

      Zachary Warnes's avatar Zachary Warnes
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    Here are my thoughts:

    1. Move this up to the hero "Seamlessly integrate language learning into browsing the web" - Looks like this is your main value proposition
    2. Wiki screenshot looks cut off
    3. Move reviews ratings higher up - social proof always come right after the hero.
    4. Do you use a landing page builder? If not maybe try out one of the templates. Your tool is powered by AI (like mine), a more modern web-builder is more on brand, if you know what I mean.

    If you have a sec, I'd appreciate support on my Product Hunt launch, voting closes in an hour - this is powered by AI too! https://www.producthunt.com/posts/narrated-tours

    byhazellim's avatar byhazellim
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    3 years ago
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      Thanks for the actionable points, I'm using a web site builder but it's not specifically designed for landing pages. I'll look into the more modern web-builders. I'll take a look at your Product Hunt launch.

      Zachary Warnes's avatar Zachary Warnes
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