Roast my landing page
Hi guys,
My name is Rish and I created Atomic (https://www.atomiclife.app/), self hosted AI planner for scheduling flexible meetings and tasks on your calendar. It's relevant to PMs, founders and teams who schedule recurring meetings and team meetings and need flexibility with their tasks. The AI planner actually guarantees availability regardless of how busy you are while blocking time for your tasks.
The purpose of the post is to get feedback on my landing page. This will allow me to clarify my main selling points better.
The focus is b2b so teams is emphasized more instead of messing it up by messaging multiple personas.
If you've tried similar products what would you like to see on the landing page to help differentiate?
Thanks for your time!
I would love your input!
Again site is: https://www.atomiclife.app/
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Before navigating to the landing page, i want to know why you wanted to built a SaaS around this? There are already a lot of tools available for this and a lot of them has already captured the market. I don't understand your "unique" part. Can you help me with that?
There are 3 established SaaS in the market:
Each lacks something or the other
All of them lack
My target is differentiation
I don't have much to say other than the fact that the color empty buttons on the header section should not be there, and that the text sections are too narrow (they should be wider to allow more room for the text).
Also, the pro plan is way too long. Again, widen the box so you can have more text horizontally rather than vertically. It makes it fit better.
For the header, why does it round to the left? I would just have it as one big rectangle rather than adding roundness to it.
Would love to follow this project on twitter, since I'm building an AI app too Evoke, but I don't see any in your bio. Here's mine for reference: https://twitter.com/TheRealEtch
here's mine https://twitter.com/rish1_2
overall looks good but the text is bold and feel more of (big and to the face) and also the text alignment when i scrolled down (4th image), i feel text alignment, font can be changed to give a professional look when connecting with B2B..
You can also include the Gif of your dashboard - how the task is performed.
it's mobile + web app combo to get a flexible meeting started. Not sure how to show that.
mobile and web app combo? i don't get your point...
You tried to show the landing page for desktop and mobile view ?
It's a mobile app but the process involves user confirming attendance via web app.
You can checkout the demo video I just released on the landing page.
I will check
Overall looks great, very cool concept. If I build out a team, I'll definitely use it. I love the graphics at the start, I really think you can tidy up the actual snippet, get some nice input boxes, checkout tailwindui.com and copy some of those. The pricing section looked a bit mental too, there's way too many ticks in the middle column! But, great job! Is that a unique concept? I've not seen it before, sounds great.
I can use tailwindui css but are you talking about the large text?
I zoomed out and took a screenshot so you can clearly see, here's a link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1fHwLlNzVII8upT2AvDjlXuDRvoagmbgD?usp=sharing
I requested access for your google drive link. It's pending.
I didn't get an email but updated the settings so the link should work again!