Roast my landing page
Hello everyone,
Me and my wife are building a remote team building platform. For now, we have created this landing page -
https://ciaoteam.com/
Can you give us some feedback about the structure, copy, design and idea?
Thanks a lot.
First of all, I love the idea behind this.
Second, the landing page copy looks like it was written by ChatGPT.
It's not clear and concise.
No benefits.
You could get away with being informal but this page is too informal.
Why?
Your target audience are team leaders (founders, mangers, etc), aren't they?
They're the ones who mobilize the team in the first place.
They also make decisions regarding the team.
I think the copy should be a semi-formal.
I'm not sure about UI/UX 'cause that's not my specialty but from a viewer's point of view, I'd say 55% at best.
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Hope this helps!
Thanks for your feedback, really appreciated.
This page has a conversion rate of 10% but I want to create another one with your suggestions, I thinks they are good.
You're welcome, Lino.
Your conversion rate looks good though. Let me know the results when you test my suggestions...
If they don't increase your CR, please abandon my suggestions😅
Growth is all about testing anyways.🙂