Roast my landing page

This is old now, but one thing that still stands out on ProspectAI-style pages: the first screen should answer who it’s for + what manual work it replaces + one proof point in 8 seconds.

Quick structure that usually lifts trial clicks:

Headline = outcome + audience (not feature)
Subhead = replaces X workflow in Y minutes
CTA = single action + low-risk promise
Add one concrete before/after example right under CTA

If you want, I can do a fast 5-fix teardown for the current version here: https://roastmysite.io/meta-ads-roast.html?src=ih_reengage_b343_l242

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This is old now, but one thing that still stands out on ProspectAI-style pages: the first screen should answer who it’s for + what manual work it replaces + one proof point in 8 seconds.

Quick structure that usually lifts trial clicks:
1. Headline = outcome + audience (not feature)
2. Subhead = replaces X workflow in Y minutes
3. CTA = single action + low-risk promise
4. Add one concrete before/after example right under CTA
If you want, I can do a fast 5-fix teardown for the current version here: https://roastmysite.io/meta-ads-roast.html?src=ih_reengage_b343_l242
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