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Roast my Landing Page!

https://artist.hitmkr.com/

Is it clear what we do? Is the offer interesting enough?
Bonus: will you share this with your musician friends?

submitted this linkon August 24, 2022
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    Hey Andy, The design looks great. Some things I'd consider changing:

    • Title: I like my titles to clearly explain what the product is, what the main benefit is and possibly make a claim. E.g. The World's Easiest Video Maker is claim = "The World's", what "video maker" & benefit "Easiest".
    • Subtitle: like this, maybe flesh out a little.
    • Offer: Drop this, too early in the process
    • CTA: Don't know what I'm signing up for. Prefer Free Trial or something I'm getting as a next step.
    • Footer: All the text under the CTA is too small, kill it or move into to a new section talking about product benefits or features.
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      Thank you - great feedback!

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    👋 Andy, not much to roast. Spacing is great, sizing is great... Nice!

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    I wouldn't sign-up without learning more about the platform.
    However I do understand this is a collection of musical musicians, clips and beats for me to purchase/use?