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Roast my landing page!

by Francis

I sent out my 1st newsletter to an audience of 10 (family and friends). I also build a landing page for the newsletter.

Here's a link to my landing page: Paiir Newsletter

My plan is to keep the landing page simple with enough content and value for conversion. It's my 1st landing page to every create and I'm not much of a UI designer.

Roast my page, let me know what I should change for a clear delivery of what value my newsletter will provide.

I used mailchimp for both, found it supper easy, AMI if you need help.

Francis's avatarFrancis
on March 14, 2023
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    Hey Francis! First of all, congrats on launching your newsletter :) Here are some feedbacks:

    1. I think it would be nice to see what am I getting other than "tips to fuel my personal and professional growth" - that's too general, you could name some of the topics you will be covering in the newsletter;
    2. I don't know, from the Landing Page, if it's a daily, weekly, or monthly e-mail;
    3. Maybe put out some samples from previous e-mails;

    Hope that helps, good luck on your project!

    fkanegae's avatar fkanegae
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      Thank you @fkanegae for the valuable feedback. I definitely didn't think of sharing a sample..

      Francis's avatar Francis
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    #1 thing I feel you need is social proof.
    #2 is established authority - who are you? are you credible? is your advice legit?

    nate4's avatar nate4
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    4 years ago
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      Thank you @nate4

      Absolutely, am working the social media platforms to build an audience and establish authority.

      Francis's avatar Francis
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