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Roast my landing page

Roast my landing page. Drop yours below and I'll take a look as well: https://qwizify.com

on October 9, 2023
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    FOA, the Color pattern is followed well, and animations are perfectly triggered, Why the Learn More button is not working? and Could have had a dark mode to white mode switch function

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    I would not include subjective questions. Kind of threw me off.

    Also, I'd connect the flash cards generated in the one section, to test questions in the next, see how they relate.

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    Seems like a solid value proposition and ditto landing page.

    I don't get why the "Study" has that green doodle on top. It just seems like noise to me (I'm probably missing a point.)

    I agree with the other comments suggesting an explainer video.

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      It's partly to emphasize the point of the product which is to help with studying and also a design element to make the page look less boring.

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    First off, MJ is the greatest basketball player ;)

    I agree that a screen shot up top would help as well.

    It would also be helpful to show a quick video of the whole process start to finish.
    Person taking notes > Scanning pic of notes from their phone to capture the text or copy and pasting text from computer > running through the product > person actually studying. Even just a pic from unsplash of someone studying would help the user have more connection.

    I'd also recommend:

    • making the language consistent on all the main CTA buttons
    • choosing a tonal button for the actual product tease so it doesn't compete with the main cta of the actual page
    • you could also try an AB test, allowing the user to post their notes at the top of the landing page to make a quiz but then when they hit enter they have to provide you their email info to start building your email list but it would also show the value to the user but then they'd have to pay for the next one
    • try targeting teachers to offer this in their class or recommending it to their students

    Good luck!

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      I love the idea of the of letting users post notes on the landing page and then capturing a sign up or email. Really great feedback.

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        Anytime :) Good luck!

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    Is it really trusted by high school students ? 😄
    Great color schema and design!

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      My brother is a high school student 😂

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    What about a little screenshot at the very top showing your product's main benefit?

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      Agreed, I also miss some screenshots.

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        The elements on the home page are the same as in the app. I thought having a physical demo was better than screenshots. Maybe I was wrong.

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    Nice one!
    In my opinion the first CTA, should mention the access of 3 free documents
    And I think the monthly option should be the one by default

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      I will definitely make those changes thanks for the feedback.

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    The link seems unaccessible.

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      I think it might have been blocked before dunno.

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